|Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary|
| theartistformerlyknownaswmlaw chapter 18 . 9/3/2008
This is so good.
| elizabethpottercullen chapter 18 . 9/3/2008
i thought this chapter was very good... not ramble-y at all.. please update soon!
| Shannon chapter 18 . 9/3/2008
This story just went from great to awesome. Thank you for writing it.
| aryabodhisattva chapter 18 . 9/3/2008
I loved it. Hey, the "feelings", the pumpkins, everything.
This "alternate Twilight" is awesome fanfic - I hope you hear that from people enough.
| Radish Earrings17 chapter 18 . 9/3/2008
Aaww she gave him the pumpkin! I totally cracked up at that part because if his behaviour with the bottlecap in Midnight Sun is any indication I immediately imagined him playing his piano with the pumpkin sitting cosily next to him, stroking the pumpkin, carrying it around with him and his family watching and thinking wha?
| AmaranthineSomnium chapter 18 . 9/2/2008
You do not disappoint. Ah, this story is paramount; it just feels so true to character and true to Twilight. I feel sorry for poor Bella-she can't help it that Edward is so wonderful. I think dear Edward is smitten, too.
“Yes, you did. You found someone.” Edward’s tone was resigned. “And you’re happy.”
I really feel for them both in this chapter. How unfair for Edward to show up and change everything. How...beautiful. And I love the imagery-the cool October afternoon, shrowded in mist and fog. Sorry if I'm not making sense...I'm tired and should get to bed because I have university in the morning, but I just wanted to express how much I enjoyed this chapter.
It's hard to not be interested in a guy when he causes those butterflies, especially if your current relationship began far differently. There is always that curiosity there, and sometimes it can lead to more than curiosity. I love that the emotions, logic and rationalizing are so realistic. I can hardly wait for the next update.
| Edward-dazzles chapter 18 . 9/2/2008
LOVED this chapter! Can't wait to read the next chapter! PLEASE update soon! ]
| End Of Reckoning chapter 18 . 9/2/2008
OMG BELLA DUMP JAKE ALREADY!
jeesh I love your Bella! Shes so sarcastic and awesome! I think there should be more Alice, but idk.
Great job! I cant wait for the next update!
| rat-de-bibliotheque chapter 18 . 9/2/2008
What a feel good chapter... well, for Bella. Maybe not Edward as much...
| purplerebecca chapter 18 . 9/2/2008
Aw, so cute!
(We are all about the feelings. Feelings good. You are talking to Twilight fans here - feelings plot) ;)
| GinnyW 31 chapter 18 . 9/2/2008
Aw. I like the feelings! This was monumental progression for Bella. LOL! I love the idea of her lovestruck, goofy grin. And I am desperate for her to realise the difference between loving a brother/friend and falling in love with someone. :) I look forward to the next update!
| jenn.at.10 chapter 18 . 9/2/2008
Its official... I'm in love with this story, I resemble Jessica Stanley when I read it!
| drivethru12345 chapter 18 . 9/2/2008
blagh la push for the next chapter? this means more jacob doesn't it? haha no no im excited don't get me wrong! i love the buildup between e & b you've got going on. still...that doesn't mean im not hoping the la push scene is a breakup scene! good chapter again :-)
| Edward-dazzles chapter 17 . 8/30/2008
I love this chapter...poor Jessica. ha ha. can't wait to read the next chapter! PLEASE update soon!
| Edward-dazzles chapter 16 . 8/30/2008
I loved this chaper! I LOVED the part with Emmett in the store! That was so funny! keep up the good work!