|Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary|
| Ava Sinclair chapter 19 . 9/11/2008
Another amazing chapter. I love the way you are really taking your time and exploring the shift in Bella's universe, not rushing it unrealistically and really showing her internal dilemma. Beautiful writing and storytelling.
I very much enjoyed your take on Sam, Leah, and Emily as well. So we actually got to see Sam's imprinting. Poor Leah. I suppose I understand what's going on with Sam but I still want to punch him - repeatedly. And Jake's so torn as well. I love Bella and Edward but it's impossible not to hurt for him. Looking forward to where you take the story next.
If my head wasn't splitting I'd go back and review the other chapters that I slacked on reviewing (not because I didn't love them, but because I'm lazy and busy, a bad combo) but that will have to wait for tomorrow. This story is too good to not review every chapter.
| AmaranthineSomnium chapter 19 . 9/11/2008
Well, well worth the wait. I'm no Jacob fan, but this chapter really had me feeling for him. He cares for Bella so much, but he can't help that there is this connection between Edward and Bella. I can't help wondering how in the world this could end happy...I mean, Edward and Bella together. You create quite a draw which grows with each chapter. And Edward brought her a pumpkin in the middle of the night! Oh, someone has it bad. :)
| PINKPUNKGUITAR chapter 19 . 9/11/2008
That was great! Update soon please. OH, does Bella have a lot of busies from falling down that stairs, if so does anybody notice them?
| MissNebraskaLIVE chapter 19 . 9/11/2008
I just... wow. I love this. But I feel awful for wishing Jake would just get hit by a bus or something...
anyway, superb job! update soon?
| GinnyW 31 chapter 19 . 9/11/2008
Even without any actually Bella/Edward action, I loved the chapter. She realised she loves him. YAY! He replaced her pumpkin! Yay, again! The Cosmo stuff made me laugh out loud. And... yay... loved it. I really, Really, REALLY hope that the next chapter arrives quicker. :)
| drivethru12345 chapter 19 . 9/11/2008
love love love it! the slow breakdown of bella/jacob is so painful to sit through (in a good way). i'm constantly wanting to scream at your bella: just dump his arse already! anyway, more edward in the next chapter! more more more :-)
| MissNebraskaLIVE chapter 18 . 9/11/2008
Dur! BELLA AND EDWARD MUST GET TOGETHER.
I DEMAND IT!
(I adore the story!)
| Aisling chapter 18 . 9/6/2008
LOl, not sure if i already reviewed this, but anyway, i will just in case, because this is seriously under-reviewed, considering how awesome this is:):):) love the story:):) its the only story that i actually read everytime its updated:) dont really know what to say now...keep up the good work:):):)
| lynhlynh chapter 18 . 9/6/2008
Oh I'm excited )
Great story btw, just read it from Chapter 1. Keep it up!
| thequietlife chapter 18 . 9/6/2008
This story is amazing! I just wanted you to know that. :P I can't wait to read more! :D
| NightsofTamara chapter 18 . 9/4/2008
Ha, ha, Alice totally vandalized Bella's truck.
And LOL at Bella offering Edward her pumpkin.
| sixtysix chapter 18 . 9/4/2008
Oh, how amazing you are.
| Lauz1 chapter 18 . 9/4/2008
Another perfect chapter, why am I even suprised? The only niggle I have it with is the End Note, stating the next chapter is in La Push. And why does that idea niggle at my thoughts? Well it's because of your and I mean this sincerely, PERFECT writing. You've carved out this wonderful story which just flows at a steady pace and leaves the readers so intrigued and desperate for more, not to mention you've made Bella and Edward...Bella and Edward. It's so rare to find a fiction where the character are true to the original Twilight.
I loved that Edward is starting to unravel the mystery that is Bella Swan, though we all know he'll never unravel it completely but at least he'll understand her a little better. And Bella realising Edward is ...well, her version of Jessica's Mike Newton (though it would be completely unfair to compare their perfect relationship with the idea of Mike and Jessica lol)
Please and this is me begging like some crack addict, please, update soon
| Moody Owl chapter 18 . 9/3/2008
Hey there. :) I have been reading your story since yesterday, but, only now that I’m done reading the last chapter online, that I’m dragging my sorry ass to tell you that I’m loving it. xD
So… yeah. I really enjoy your writing style. It flows well, the story never gets tiresome (well, unless when you are writing about Jake, but that’s not really your fault. I am the one who is eager to kick him back to his ‘best-friend’ status. Sorry Jake fans. xD).
I love the fact that you are writing about two characters that we already know will be together, but you still manage to leave me eager for that to happen. I like that you are taking it slow, that you are giving them time to get to know each other a little bit more before they actually go and confess being in love with each other.
I also like how you seem to get how Edward’s mind works. To me, he was always that insecure guy who goes out of his way to look otherwise. I can see him overly thinking everything, analyzing every little step he takes. I miss a little bit of his interaction with Alice, but I believe that it’s not time yet for her to be more ‘active’, right? :D Hope I’m right… heh.
I also like Bella. I like her being in an almost desperate state of denial, heh. She will soon find out what sweeps-you-out-of-your-feet love is, uh? :D
Anyway… pretty long review (sorry about that) just to tell you that I’m REALLY liking this fic and that I hope to see more of it really soon *hint, hint*. xD
Btw, you said in one of your author notes that you were considering writing this in Edward’s POV too. Gee… all I have to say is that I would LOVE IT, for sure. :D
| Cast Some Light chapter 18 . 9/3/2008
Love this. Love love. Wonderful chapter, I love their interaction. Edward is so spot on, and I love how Bella is subconsciously happier than she's ever been.
Update son, this is quickly becoming my crack.