Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary
Guest chapter 35 . 7/12/2018
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!...I Haven't words...I just love this perfect fanfic so so so so much You're a S.M? We need more! You were been more than , our hearts need feel moreMore Edward and his loveI cant help falling in love. I beg you, write a sequel, a continuation...I'm begging
Guest chapter 35 . 6/25/2018
I wish this was finished I loved this story . Wow just wow
Debbie Hicks chapter 35 . 4/23/2018
that suddenly both our katrs then suddenly a single but tiny voice Screanimig IMZADI! Her gasped the word touched his soul forever one and whole then then blacked out was marked as his imzadi mate then the alien Rattlesnake venom was still in my system, then weith bitten best you broke law what law i am his m ate his imzadi Fwelix Both broken the venom was stran ded blood was really poured then a loud noise then then then with the Venom heaviest of all of went to m y failing system Aliice helpo me then then ten my powers emerged too late then then aAFled then with the very as all of the very fiery side afteraffect then thern blown freely weith implanted kids eights then then with both with the others was attacked then then scream ing of the fully time official change they done this ten Blacked outside fled from here then brought here then m y chan ge came too late the venom then then too late skin turnede iciest coldest as ice then ten blown freeely Extinct then ten brought each both we report he consorterd with her but her deathj is real they broken law of newborns had only eight kids dead smasherd bring them here then too late ther pain weas far too hottest then suddenly my heart stopped pumping decomissioned offically then myself felt from the NASA Bodysuit from Buffy the Vampire slayer my sparkling but crystalized felt my own hand to my troatr blocking very differently Alice yoo hoo ABella yoo hoo you are a Mental shield with them due my horror Falkor's red eyesd my hair was longer with bangs Alice Bella oh my god she's what I Am really hungry it's Animals then hunted with them they with them the kids aged to adulthood had kids then Clamped frerely then ripped tore from pierced frhroats then brought here then suddenly punished then crunched freely then ten tore freely then buried them butr resurrected then Fled was out for blood then then as all of animals blown tore freely then So much then then then Lost from here were more as all of from as all of homes as all of them then Snapped from here then ripped freely then we find her punishedd for crimes of m urder then blew freely then slienced bring as all of them then clamped from humanity then then was not mortal at all Alice who did to her Volturi then myself hated what Became a Monster had struggled with the goddess Alice she's not human then in time then then blown Blew freely now gained a new look so they then was not alive they had her killed yes but reincarnated myself was glowing then blinding then BETAZED CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! ANGELOS! TRANSFORM! Then too late was not alive then suddenly letting loose a trilling Xena Warrior princess 's war cry of vengeance with them then myself was not normal with venom then too late caused a chain reaction then Stood fiercer Athletic but fit stronger an d lethal but powerful by now as all of them were a race.
Guest chapter 35 . 4/17/2018
Gross concept for a story, sorry. Nobody likes Jacob
harkie5 chapter 35 . 4/14/2018
your story was amazing! Thank you for sharing!
Sidni101 chapter 35 . 3/14/2018
Please update Please. This is one of the best Fanfiction I have read
mh21 chapter 35 . 2/9/2018
This was lovely. So we'll written and sweet and romantic. 10/10 will read again. I hope theres a sequel, adding to my favorites.
Guest chapter 35 . 1/18/2018
I'm not really much interested in twilight now but I absolutely loved this fic back in the day and it has honestly always stuck in my mind as one of the best fics I have read. so anyway, just wanted to say thanks for that x
analise17 chapter 27 . 9/4/2017
I had a nice good cry reading the last few chapters while listening to Secondhand Serenade's "It's Not Over." Thanks, I truly and sincerely needed a good cry. :'D
Guest chapter 19 . 6/27/2017
Oh what! Was that Sam imprinting! Holy moly!
Guest chapter 14 . 6/26/2017
Ugh you totally had me at the "what color are they" part. I so thought they were gonna kiss
Guest chapter 13 . 6/26/2017
Hahah glad she is out of her shell even if she didnt like to drink. Hmm and lucky Edward just so happened to show up huh. Yesss I can't wait for drunk Bella and Edward banter.
Guest chapter 12 . 6/26/2017
Hey there. Hmm Jake isn't being supportive huh. No bueno. He better step up before Edward does.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/26/2017
"Buying things that are not for sale"!
How funny you mention he reminds you of Bruce Wayne because that is who I have been. Imagining as well.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/26/2017
Im really liking your timeline and how the characters are older. And that Bella isnt obsessing over her age. That really got on my nerves in the book.
Im gonna try and leave a review for each chapter here on out as I believe your story deserves the recognition and the most reviews possible.
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