Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary
jk chapter 14 . 3/5/2015
see what I mean? he fucking puts himself in her life...talking to her, giving her that application, saving her from falling cause shes a idiot, walking her home, and then he says they cant be friends but aquintences...their alreadythat. bella should have just told him to fuck off right there and then just forget about his stupid ass...hes boring as shit too
jk chapter 12 . 3/5/2015
theres bella again being all stupid...and It is kinda selfish of her to apply to Dartmouth knowing jake cant and wont leave ya know...if jakes her life and if she loves him like she says the stupid selfish little bitch would just go to ya shes fucking selfis.h...pooooor jake
jk chapter 11 . 3/5/2015
is that Edward flirting? bella making a big deal about not caring about her birthday...she just comes off as a ungreatful bitch by the way...and Edward saying happy birthday
god I could fucking be watching paint dry right now and itd be better then this bullshit
your versions of bella and Edward kinda suck
jk chapter 10 . 3/5/2015
cryptic? fucking hardly
it was just boring small talk like usual
and again Edward was dick and I don't know why th stupid little fan girl likes him so much
jk chapter 9 . 3/5/2015
whats with Edward being a smirky dick?
isn't bella is mate? then why is he acting like hes trying to piss her off?
and why in the fuck does bella like him so much? hes given exactly zero reasons to like him! fuck him
bella and jake!
jk chapter 7 . 3/5/2015
what the point here? you have her in "love" with jake...but whats the point if it changes nothing?
she hasn't fucked jake...shame really
and she still wants edweird the second she sees him, still obsecces over him like the little idiot fangirl she is...and blushes cause she read "kisses her" on a play script their reading...whats the point of making her experienced if she isn't experienced? and if her feelings for jake make no fucking difference?
again what the hell is the point? ohh so its just twilight but a shittier version...nice
jk chapter 3 . 3/5/2015
why is she being so stupid? is she a insecure little freshman/..?
This is how it should go
bella- what the fuck is your problem?
Edward- nothing...glares like a asshole
bella- ya ok, go screwyourself
then bella proceeds to forget all about the assole
jk chapter 2 . 3/5/2015
why is she blushing? does anyone really do that?
its too big of a tell you should do away with it...bella needs every advantage she can get
jasmine.n.underwood chapter 35 . 2/17/2015
Please continue this awesome story
Mizzy9986 chapter 18 . 1/25/2015
I much prefer the bella in this book she is much more light hearted and lively.
emmacat1234 chapter 35 . 1/8/2015
This is easily the best fanfic I've ever read. I doubt you're ever going to update, but I'll subscribe and hope nonetheless
Adham chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
Am really amazed by the way u wrote this it's just so sweet and real I hope u will complete this soon so we can read.
lemonangeljuice chapter 35 . 11/1/2014
This story was one added to my read list from the NYC Twi-Fic meet up. I think it was mentioned by panel authors as a story they most wanted an update from. I loved the end of chapter 34. I think it is a romantic conclusion to this story and is the best place to jump to an epilogue. Thank you for the story!
Cc chapter 6 . 10/24/2014
I really live your story and I am up to chapter 7 now. I like the concept of the story and think you at talented even I this your first one.
esmegrace chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
Oxy, I just got a random hankering to re-experience your fantastic story today. I just clicked on the reviews to see if people were still reading and saw the Guest review posted on 6/25. Please disregard that hateful garbage. What a coward to write something so vile anonymously. Your writing is fantastic, and I hope you are writing original stuff now or doing something even better with your life. I don't know if you still read these reviews, but if you don't, then I still want this here for other readers to see. And Guest, why did you read all 35 chapters if it was so bad? I wish you continued misery in your sad, little life.
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