Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary
kiwisrock chapter 12 . 10/6/2013
Charlie is an awesome Dad! Wow! Thanks!
kiwisrock chapter 11 . 10/6/2013
Your explanations are really enlightening!
I'm interested to see how this does become "Edward & Bella" though because of all the circumstances.
kiwisrock chapter 10 . 10/6/2013
I'm with Scrappy Doo, I love a good mystery!
kiwisrock chapter 9 . 10/6/2013
I'm finding it intriguing and captivating and so interesting your take on things & Edward & Bella's relationship at present...
Also makes me feel so lucky for tuition fees in my country!
kiwisrock chapter 8 . 10/6/2013
Thanks! I like you describing what happened to Sam!
kiwisrock chapter 7 . 10/6/2013
Definately the best type of foreplay!
kiwisrock chapter 6 . 10/5/2013
Great conversation...thanks!
kiwisrock chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
Cool that jake met Dr. Cullen...
kiwisrock chapter 4 . 10/5/2013
Cool! Glad Leah is happy, I hope it lasts. Thanks!
kiwisrock chapter 3 . 10/5/2013
Thanks...we're still moving...
kiwisrock chapter 2 . 10/5/2013
Your Bella's funny in her own peculiar way...thanks!
kiwisrock chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Just started reading! It's great your take on Bella especially! Thanks!
aduty24 chapter 35 . 9/7/2013
A most excellent, yet sadly unfinished story :(
Guest chapter 35 . 8/31/2013
Oh. My. Gosh. I know you wrote this forever ago, but I still wanted to review. I absolutely love this story. No joke. I read it from start to finish today. It even made me cry (several times)! I love the premise, and how you characterize everyone. It feels so real to me. I'm so happy that even though this story is unfinished, it ends at a good point. Bella and Edward are slowly working their way to being together. Jacob's character is fascinating. I can't come up with enough good things to say about this story. Thank you very very very much for the absolutely riveting, compelling, and engrossing, wonderfully written, et cetera et cetera story. :)
kaday chapter 35 . 7/13/2013
Please finish this story.
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