Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary
tanya.glover.79 chapter 35 . 6/6/2013
This story is simply fantastic. I was glued from start to finish and loved every word! At the risk of insulting a very popular author, I like this version 100 times better the original. Sorry, Stephanie but it's true! I adore the original series. the books were wonderful and the movies were great as well. however, even though I was always a huge head Edward fan I really felt terribly for Jacob. With your version of the story It is much easier to have a clear-cut good guy Even if you change things up as you go later. it never set well with me... him being around her all the time and imprinting on her daughter. This person is just... right. please hurry with some more!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 35 . 6/1/2013
Amazing amazing story so far! I know it's been years since you put it on hiatus, but I really hope you're still up to updating. You're an amazing writer!
I love Bella's slightly different personality. It's good that she isn't so quick to forgive him and let bygones be bygones. That really bothered me in the original series. After everything that she's been through in this story, it was completely right of her to hold back. it took many chapters, and I think it could have taken more time in real life, but it seemed to be spaced well. I also love that not everything is perfect between them; they're still tentatively trying to work things out... though I doubt much can be done until they talk again.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
That70sshowlova chapter 35 . 5/28/2013
This story is fantastically written. The characters are well developed, unlike the actual book, and I love it. I really enjoy this story.
lemonbutt chapter 3 . 5/8/2013
Edward is dramatic.
lemonbutt chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
rainbow1825 chapter 35 . 4/15/2013
Keep going, keep going!
tobyntoby chapter 18 . 4/5/2013
I loved this chapter! I really have enjoyed reading your story, thanks..
tobyntoby chapter 9 . 4/4/2013
Great chapter. Thanks
ItCan'tRainForever chapter 35 . 3/17/2013
Love it!

Is this the end of the story?
Pathatlon chapter 35 . 3/5/2013
Awwww... I'll be following this. I can't believe the dogs are such jerks. It's a good thing this story is in reverse. It makes it more believable
Pathatlon chapter 18 . 3/4/2013
I've been in this EXACT situation (not the supernatural part). This is exactly how I reacted... Everytime boyfriend was mentioned it fell flat to the ground. Sort of taboo... The tensions... It's very realistic written.
SarcasticBimbo chapter 22 . 2/25/2013
SarcasticBimbo chapter 18 . 2/25/2013
Have you seen you? Lord no, I wouldn't recognize you if you smile. Totally got a laugh out of that part.
SarcasticBimbo chapter 14 . 2/24/2013
Eduardo the evil twin! LMFAO
SarcasticBimbo chapter 13 . 2/24/2013
Sorry I haven't reviewed before. I am kind of liking this alternate universe you have created.
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