Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary
Cullen 3 chapter 35 . 7/6/2013
This was an amazing book I read for 2 days
The ending leaves holes
One of my biggest pet peeves is fanfiction stories with either a bad ending or not finishing the story they started!

Other than the fact the ending was TERRIBLE
The idea and the story before the ending was a nice twist on Twilight

BUT I'm still leg hanging about Jacob (other things to) Also in the original Twilight Edward says there was nothing he could do if James got a whiff of Bella so that should have been in the story

AND the Jacob thing gets on my nerves if Bella had clouser with Jacob I would have loved the ending but that made me regret wasting my time to read this and then add on to the reviews

Cullen 3
apharion chapter 35 . 7/4/2013
I love this story. I don't know if you are even checking in to read reviews any more. If you are, I want to tell you I've reread it at least 30 times and it is a deeply satisfying read. I am convinced it is finished. You don't have anything more to say and more importantly, the characters have nothing more to say. It's reached a stopping point. There is obviously more story, but we all know the story. You don't have to finish it for us. This version ends here, at a resolution and it satisfies as it is, so thank you. You are a very talented, smart and perceptive writer.
REgrrl chapter 35 . 7/2/2013
Found this lovely fic and have enjoyed it thoroughly. Wish it was complete. It's lovely.
Sfeather chapter 35 . 6/10/2013
Wow! Just wow. I know this is weird to say, but I'm surprised this story had not passed 6000 reviews. I like it better than a lot of other b/e stories here. This story made me laugh and cry. You are an amazing writer and I hope you continue this story!
TeamComrade11 chapter 35 . 6/10/2013
I am absolutely in love with your story and if you don't update again I am going to cry myself to sleep for the rest of my life. I have to admit, I like your story more then Stephanie Meyers. (Shh, don't tell anybody!) PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue with this story. It is absolutely pure AMAZINGNESS. I wish I could be as great of a writer as you are. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue with this story PLEASEEEEEE! :) 3 3 3 This is seriously the greatest story that I have read on this website. PLEASE CONTINUE3
tanya.glover.79 chapter 35 . 6/6/2013
This story is simply fantastic. I was glued from start to finish and loved every word! At the risk of insulting a very popular author, I like this version 100 times better the original. Sorry, Stephanie but it's true! I adore the original series. the books were wonderful and the movies were great as well. however, even though I was always a huge head Edward fan I really felt terribly for Jacob. With your version of the story It is much easier to have a clear-cut good guy Even if you change things up as you go later. it never set well with me... him being around her all the time and imprinting on her daughter. This person is just... right. please hurry with some more!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 35 . 6/1/2013
Amazing amazing story so far! I know it's been years since you put it on hiatus, but I really hope you're still up to updating. You're an amazing writer!
I love Bella's slightly different personality. It's good that she isn't so quick to forgive him and let bygones be bygones. That really bothered me in the original series. After everything that she's been through in this story, it was completely right of her to hold back. it took many chapters, and I think it could have taken more time in real life, but it seemed to be spaced well. I also love that not everything is perfect between them; they're still tentatively trying to work things out... though I doubt much can be done until they talk again.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
That70sshowlova chapter 35 . 5/28/2013
This story is fantastically written. The characters are well developed, unlike the actual book, and I love it. I really enjoy this story.
lemonbutt chapter 3 . 5/8/2013
Edward is dramatic.
lemonbutt chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
rainbow1825 chapter 35 . 4/15/2013
Keep going, keep going!
tobyntoby chapter 18 . 4/5/2013
I loved this chapter! I really have enjoyed reading your story, thanks..
tobyntoby chapter 9 . 4/4/2013
Great chapter. Thanks
ItCan'tRainForever chapter 35 . 3/17/2013
Love it!

Is this the end of the story?
Pathatlon chapter 35 . 3/5/2013
Awwww... I'll be following this. I can't believe the dogs are such jerks. It's a good thing this story is in reverse. It makes it more believable
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