Reviews for The Picture Perfect Theft
Liebert chapter 2 . 5/9/2012
HAHAHA I love your Balthier! And Penelo is very lovely and innocent for her own good haha
Liebert chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
great work! favorite now
The Red Courage chapter 11 . 5/4/2012
Great story! I have loved every line!
The Red Courage chapter 10 . 5/3/2012
Poor Balthier!
The Red Courage chapter 9 . 5/3/2012
Oh, I look forward to them getting together again!
The Red Courage chapter 8 . 5/3/2012
What a glorious ending to the chapter!
The Red Courage chapter 7 . 5/3/2012
I enjoyed this chapter!
The Red Courage chapter 6 . 5/3/2012
Return of the forward Penelo! :D
The Red Courage chapter 5 . 5/3/2012
So many conflictions for Balthier! But nice to see his inner turmoil!
The Red Courage chapter 4 . 5/3/2012
I bet Balthier did not think Penelo was so forward! XD
The Red Courage chapter 3 . 5/3/2012
Awww, how sweet!
The Red Courage chapter 2 . 5/3/2012
I'm so glad she agreed!
The Red Courage chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
How mysterious! I look forward to reading the rest of this!
peccantis chapter 10 . 4/12/2012
Ah... Excuisite _ 3 Very much loving the feeling and details here.
peccantis chapter 2 . 4/10/2012
I am delighted by your Penelo's voice (insightful and a change from all those carefree girly girlies), and how every character seems to be so alive, Reddas with his impatience, Vaan with his eager childishness, even Fran (again, a refreshing take)... And how your Balthier is not too pleasant, and in fact, is even somewhat infuriating in his antics. Chapter 1 seemed to have a bit hard to follow narrating, but chapter 2 has none such problems. Lovely work this far.
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