Clever writing, well paced, and gripping. I was glued to this from chapter one. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Unfassbar gut geschrieben! Hat Spaß gemacht diese tolle Geschichte zu lesen :)

“Silly little fic” No! You do yourself, your hard work and brilliant story telling a disservice. This was a thoroughly enjoyable read, with an emotional intensity few other stories here achieve. Thank you for sharing your work with us! (And also for feeding the needy fan girl!)

Beautiful just wow. Thank you. (Still processing) love it.

simplemente hermoso 3

Thank you for writing and sharing such a wonderful story

Gu

Oh god. I’ve been greatly enjoying this story, but this chapter hit me in the gut the most. I thought she would be able to save him, but AHHHH . I’m sobbing.

I’m guessing at this point it encourages Lily to go back to her own time and change this outcome from happening because she can’t be without Sev now. Thank you for ripping my heart out with this one and for all the angst and feels.

a conflict between feeling.
For now i dont seem like her,Lily.
i will try to read more ...understand them

Is it a bad thing I can relate to Snape?

Ry

Ee

I like this fanfic, but Dumbledore being evil is not ok with me and the part about conceiving Harry. It is really makes the whole płot down rated.

Jesus Christ every part of this fic is so wildly creepy. The fuck is actually wrong with you?

Good story! I would have preferred an epilogue, but that is just my opinion. Well written and thought out.

Meh, I was hoping James would die a hero or something. These last 3 chapters have had me a bundle of anxiety. I'm not sure how why it is taking Snape months to figure out the nagini anti venom when it only took like a week 7 years later when Arthur Weasley got bit? I guess because plot?