Very original plot twist, with the villain, definitely didn't see that one coming

sorry to the author but this was a hard read. i think i only stayed bc it has james bashing in it and the fact its actually written well. lily was so god damn annoying that i actually hate her now. so many times i wanted to smash my head in a wall because of her is countless. but overall the story is written well, its just not for me.

This was a very enjoyable story until the last two chapters and then holy shitballs! Literally jawdropping cliff hanger and then it just got better and better! You certainly don’t shy away from just throwing everything in the air and ramping it up several gears! Absolutely outstanding!

Extremely cool conclusion.

Very interesting parallels, a delicious chapter.

Wow, what a twist!

Epic phrases:

"don't mind me, this is only my home" (Remus is funny as hell in this fic ;))

"those things are not mutually exclusive"

Nice chapter. Well, she has her work cut out for her.

Interesting... that *is* a way to avoid the issue of Voldemort coming after Harry.

Well, actually, if push came to shove thanks to their ignorance about the existence of contraceptives, and she got pregnant when she didn't want babies, an abortion would seem a perfectly legitimate solution for her to consider, certainly better than marrying someone because she got pregnant. I mean, not like they are ideologically opposed to abortion for religious reasons, if one considers UK attitudes towards the topic. It was nice that Petunia was defensive of her, though ;)

Frankly, marrying in haste at 21 because they are in a circumstance where they could die seems a *horrible* idea for a successful long term relationship. Then again, we are talking about people that have apparently never heard of contraceptives ;)

Well, that's one sensible reason to deal with the Peter issue ;)

Well, they were dead at 21 and he had been her only long term relationship, so impossible to say anything about the long term, really, or about the the nature and evolution of feelings. After all, she is living proof of how things could change in a relatively short time period, even. Or not at all, to take Snape's feelings for her as another example. Also, James had not really been *that* sincere about everything he was up to, specifically at school, had he? Let alone "unpretentiously" so. Still, I liked the switcharoo, where she almost seems to be talking herself into being with him and giving it a chance, and then tells her she wants to break up, after he proposes. Talk about misdirection, for a moment I thought she was ready to accept ;)

Loved how composed Snape was when dealing with Bellatrix. Also, very quote-worthy.

Ah, so I was not the only one to think the dialogue with Bellatrix was hilarious ;)