waah the story is open ended and the title drop at the end make me got goosebumps

Holy shit. Literally every chapter is just needless angst.

excellent
i love that story
thanks

It'll work out just fine, trust me.

Reading this fic in one day was an absolute thrill ride. Loved the story specially the Snily romance might be the best I've ever read. Sometimes a lot of details didn’t get focus or the story jumped too fast which left me a bit frustrated but I am glad the Snily section never took a backseat.

Yup!... Even dead, Dumbledor is a manipulative bastard!

I know this is written story but, would it be irrational of me to want to step into the story and shake Lily until all the marbles fall back into place? I mean, I get that she has been holed up in this house for way too long by her standards but honestly, Severus has done nothing but take care of her completely since she showed up! Is it ridiculous to expect her to show a little gratitude and respect to a man who has clearly done everything in his power to help and protect her? I know, I know, I'm getting too involved in the story but, that's what you hope your readers do, right?

Perfect characterization, very true to canon. Which is why I don't much like this Lily Evans. But you managed to make your characters very much alive, very human and relatable most of the time. It was one of the most thorough and well-written Snevans romances, but ultimately it only convinced me that the best Snevans is the one that should never happen.

Lily just keeps making questionable decisions based on a faulty knowledge. That may be unkind of me, but I'm starting to really hope it all will come back to bite her in the ass.

Wow, Lily is an idiot. And here I thought she was at least a bit of a scientist, wasn't she supposed to be an academic star? She spent months studying time-travel and never realized that she might be not actually a time-traveler, but a dimension-hopper in a multi-universe? It's also not that hard to test the closed-loop time-travel theory: Snape said he saw her body in the morgue, so find a piece of unscarred flesh, say, on her leg, and cut that leg with some dark curse that would leave a permanent scar. If her worldline looped into a circuit, there would've been a scar on her leg, but since there weren't the universe simply won't allow her to get that injurythe curse would just not work. If the curse worksit's not a closed-loop, and if it doesn'tthen it is, easy-peasy. If it were a closed-loop, then she could actually just go put that office, track down and brutally murder Carrows, then wait for Voldemort to arrive and kill him off too. Because if ahe's bound to safely return to the past, then nothing can happen to her in the future.

And if it's not a closed-loop after all, then she can freely change the past however she likes.

I won't comment on her irrational feelings about Harry, because, well, feelings are irrational by definition. And that's not why she's an idiot. She's an idiot because she's stupid.

You know, I really liked Lily until the book seven. I mean, that scene by the lake in the book five, it made her look like that genuinely good and kind girl everyone was saying Lily Evans was throughout the series,that is, a genuinely good and kind girl... if you look at her as just a girl who tried to stand up for some random stranger from Slytherin and against her own House at that. But then comes the book seven... and we learn Snape and Evans were friends all alongbest friends no less. And I can't help but question myself: what the fuck was that? Is that what a good friend does when her friend is being ganged up on? Just standing there, exchanging quips with the assailants, and having a lengthy discussion on the moral character of everyone involved? Not fucking cursing them, not casting a simple shiled, not even docking points and assigning detentions? If I had a friend like that, I wouldn't mind not having her at all.

Read it all over again, and pretty sure will do so again in the future! This is one of the best written fanfics out there and I can’t get enough of our favorite angsty hero! Thank you so much for all the effort you’ve put into making this a reality for all of us.
On another note, please do let us know if you’ve written anything for sale as you are such a terrific writer and would love to support your work!

Wow. I have no words. What a wonderful, surprising, and original story! You wrote Lily and Severus so credibly - and your Dumbledore gave me goosebumps. Thank you so much for sharing.

Hi there, this entire story was so insanely beautiful, and I'm still processing as I end up at the start again. I love the story you've crafted. That we we just love, and that fine lines of contingency exist in our world, that we don't know where they'll lead us, that we try our best in this messy messy world. You did a beautiful job imagining this story and bringing it to life.

I was left wondering what her new patronus form was? Is it a dragon? Tiger? A greek animal?

I really liked how this chapter ended, with James realizing there's a path to the future through love and hope. Which had transformed Severus as well. Marvelous!