|Reviews for Try|
| chibihinachan chapter 2 . 8/2/2013
ehhhhh? what about Kashi?! You can't just leave him like that! O.O lol really good for a first timer :) little surprised at how...mellow you made Sasuke, but other than that, it was good. btw, yay for NaruHina! most adorable couple ever, tied with NejiTen :D
| Akira Nishikawa chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
O.O what happen with this? wasn't this a one-shot story? why broke the story and make a second chappie?
| Prescripto13 chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
With this being Sasuke's first foray into sexual intimacy, Kakashi showed patience and consideration. That's admirable.
| Prescripto13 chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
I'm rooting for the day in the manga when these two finally reconnect!
| LibertineEyes chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
AWWWWWWWWEE. I don't know why this was so cute to me. Inexperienced little sasuke was adorable:3 you should continue this:o I'd love to read how their relationship goes.
| alpharoyale chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Mhm, love it!
Sweet, but hot too.
Especially loved the bit where Kakashi doesn't respond to Sasuke's kiss, builds up the suspense :D
| Obelisk of Light chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
This has to be the most believable KakaSasu fic I've ever read. There's no apparent OOCness; the Sharingan "bond" is an unique concept; and the ending was hot. XD
Although, you might want to name your subsequent stories with relevant titles.
| Shimaki-33 chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
...I am speach less...that was so good 3 I had bangd my head to the desk when Naruto said that he didn't know Hinata liked him LOL
this was so good awsome
| Akira Nishikawa chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Good Good Good...Liked very much...
| XxEmoYaoiXKakaSasuxX chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
| Nyn-the-Cat chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
I loved this story!
Especially the idea of the soothing influence of Kakashi's sharingan on Sasuke. It was novel (at least for me) and made perfect sense.
The lemon part went a little quickly, but was still very hot.
Well done indeed! :)
| wings.glued.on chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
You don't give yourself enough credit-this was seriously good! It had a refreshing simplicity about it that I loved.
I'll be looking for more from you. : )
| Witty Sarcasm chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
For a 'not very practiced writer' you sure did hella good with this story! The plot was fantastic; I've never really thought of Sasuke seeking out the only Sharingan left...that was a great idea!
As for 'rushed and unorganized'...it really wasn't, it was great. I think it was drawn out long enough to NOT seem rushed and was really good organized wise. Just remember, IT'S A ONESHOT. Sometimes, these short stories do seem a bit fast. But they're supposed to be!
Anyway, great job with this! You picked a great pairing! P