|Reviews for Goal|
| RandomWiseCracks chapter 11 . 10/19/2014
I really love your writing style and all but I'm kinda wondering if you know or if anyone's pointed out the fact that American Football is played in halves not quarters?
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/2/2014
You can watch it on
| Kriss1989 chapter 14 . 9/8/2014
Hey! Looking forward to more of this.
| Ridea chapter 14 . 7/8/2014
Hey, I know it's been awhile but I really enjoy where you're going with this story. I understand though about falling out of interest as being busy. If you do continue it, I look forward to it.
| Matsukaze Tenma chapter 14 . 3/15/2014
Thank you for the update; I hope to read the next chapters soon
| School-Read-Sleep-Routine chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Very thankful about 'not doing any HiruSena.' Riku's like another Ikkyu.
| School-Read-Sleep-Routine chapter 14 . 2/25/2014
I'm happy enough now that Shin recognizes Sena... One step closer. *grins*
| School-Read-Sleep-Routine chapter 10 . 2/25/2014
I love the worrywart trio, so cooooool! I wonder how'd they react if Sena's taken liking to the one who keeps tackling her mercilessly, lol.
| pinaygurl28 chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
i like sena with shin
| Amai Itonami chapter 14 . 1/23/2014
It's been pretty long since you've updated this but I still want to say that I really am fond of this story. I quite like the way your FemSena is like CanonSena but also is still feminine in many ways. I really hope you decide to update one day. :3
| N'Weaver chapter 14 . 12/1/2013
I think this story deserves an update, no pressure or anything, but pretty please? I like your sena very much if I do say so myself. She retains much of Sena's canon personality and still manage to act feminine enough to make it realistic. I especially liked how you brought in her 'brothers' early into the game. It gives the story a nice spin.
My only concern is the fact that you're following the plot much too closely to make it the perfection it could be. When I read about shin holding Sena (intimately I might add) it seemed like a nice refreshing change to the original plot. I'm NOT saying you shouldn't follow the plot, but I think it would be nice if you added new elements throughout the whole story, maybe change a few relationships, different game tactics.
Again, I would like to point out that I love this story and I hope I didn't destroy any reader to author relationship. :) Keep up the good work anyway.
| twenty-one clouds chapter 14 . 11/26/2013
Please,please,please continue with this when you have the time. :) I really like your Fem!Sena story. Also, her relationship with her three nii-sans make everything so much more interesting. I am soooo excited for the moment she reunites with Riku.
| LunarStar98 chapter 14 . 11/14/2013
please continue, can't wait for the next chapter!
| herseybarrules chapter 14 . 8/27/2013
i seriously hope u continue this story pretty interesting so far and hilarious hopefully u can get ur muse back on :D
| An Echo In Time chapter 14 . 8/8/2013
I'm re reading the series myself and am remembering why I loved the series so much! I hope your passion for eyeshield is renewed as much as mine has been! I can't wait for the next chapter!