love your story! :)

Christ, everyone is so creepy in this chapter. Intentionally gathering around and listening to your friends/family have sex? I’ll admit I can’t remember their ages (started this quite a while ago and am just picking it up again now) so maybe they’re just a bunch of immature kids, but God I cannot get over how gross this was. Especially Emmett. I wish you’d incorporated, at the very least, healthy/funny teasing - or just something that doesn’t involve harassing people about the sex they’re having. This was way over the top.

Not realistic, if there is suspicion of someone being drug, there some blood testing should have been run on bella. I doubt she would have discharge so quickly but i do not how US hospitals operate. Then if test came back positive a complain should have been lodged and police involve. A real investigation conducted.

Who buys a pair of $700 shoes in the wrong size ‘just in case’? Ridiculous.

Don’t tell me. She’s a virgin? Because we haven’t read that before.

Thanks for this fun adventure I really enjoyed it. :)

Love It!

great job loved this story!

He wasn't cheating on Bella, he was committing adulty with her!

its perfectly natural and not gross to bone when riding the crimson Tide and sometimes the sex is better than when off the period. live a little people

Why on earth doesn't she ride the short bus? Bella has been written as such a clutz that she is nothing but a caricature. Seriously, is she about to have a 1000 lb anvil dropped on her head? Some authors just don't know where to draw the line between clumsy and handicapped.

Absolutely love this story..thanks! Great writing!

Loved this sweet story. Wish you had a future take, something to wrap up the story.

Oh! How sweet ;)

That is.a start ;)