Reviews for Private Tutor
Crtc chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
When I read the first chapter, I found many grammatical and punctuation errors. I understand that it was your first fanfiction, but even if it was, you could have done a lot to improve it. Otherwise, it's an okay story. Not one that I would read, but what some people would find interesting.
xBabySnapsx chapter 41 . 4/21/2014
awwww this story was one hell of a rollercoaster but it was awesome love it!
Narci9237 chapter 41 . 4/10/2014
WOW! I just read your story and couldn't stop at how amazing it is. I loved how passionate they were even though they went through a lot of self doubt and hard time, they never really lost their love or hope. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story I will re read again and again. If you ever do a sequal on them I would love to read it, anything about their future, kids? YOU ROCK! Narcy :-)
Toni Masen chapter 41 . 2/24/2014
That was majorly sad at the airport. They seriously need to brush up on their communication skills.
jus2read chapter 41 . 2/16/2014
Aw! I loved it- so bloody awesome :D made me laugh, made me cry, everything! Fantastically written and great storyline 3
as925 chapter 12 . 12/31/2013
The Cullen's live next to Bella's aunt and uncle since they have a yellow car and Alice drives that color car right
ruthnickcj chapter 34 . 10/30/2013
What the fuck!?
ruthnickcj chapter 28 . 10/30/2013
Hot at the beginning and funny at the end awesome.
ruthnickcj chapter 27 . 10/30/2013
God that was hot and soooo GOOD!
ruthnickcj chapter 26 . 10/30/2013
Lol I was laughing so hard I started to cry! Thank you for the awesome read!
ruthnickcj chapter 6 . 10/27/2013
Just great James drugged her just as she was getting closer to Edward.
ruthnickcj chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
Wow she can not catch a break with him.
ruthnickcj chapter 4 . 10/27/2013
Wow so Edward is a little mixed up...and an ass to.
sandalyn05 chapter 41 . 8/6/2013
Loved this story! I laughed and I cried. I'm so glad he went an got her because there was no other way!
Eli42 chapter 41 . 8/3/2013
I LOVED your fic. You had great continuity and flow throughout most of the story. The only area that I found troublesome was chapter 40. It was very confusing to figure out when we were and what was going on. The answers to those questions weren't answered until much later, causing them to not have as strong of an effect.
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