Reviews for Private Tutor |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Edward left himself so vulnerable. It's kinda cute that he called himself out sick :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward signed "Love" Looks like he's ready to take the plunge... James, what a pervert. Will he be back? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter :) I love Bohemian Rhapsody! I love how they all reacted to the song. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How is Bella gonna live down this night? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Thanks for Edwards POV. That helps a lot! I didn't know what he was thinking, so it helps a lot :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ? What's wrong with Edward? Does Bella smell funny :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm guessing Bella is a senior since Alice is her roommate for the next year... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks interesting... if she is starting over, did she go to college before? What year is she in? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() oh my God this is so fucking hot! So glad I found your fic. keep writing, please! |
![]() ![]() When I read the first chapter, I found many grammatical and punctuation errors. I understand that it was your first fanfiction, but even if it was, you could have done a lot to improve it. Otherwise, it's an okay story. Not one that I would read, but what some people would find interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwww this story was one hell of a rollercoaster but it was awesome love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! I just read your story and couldn't stop at how amazing it is. I loved how passionate they were even though they went through a lot of self doubt and hard time, they never really lost their love or hope. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story I will re read again and again. If you ever do a sequal on them I would love to read it, anything about their future, kids? YOU ROCK! Narcy :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was majorly sad at the airport. They seriously need to brush up on their communication skills. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! I loved it- so bloody awesome :D made me laugh, made me cry, everything! Fantastically written and great storyline 3 xxx |