Reviews for Private Tutor |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The Cullen's live next to Bella's aunt and uncle since they have a yellow car and Alice drives that color car right |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the fuck!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot at the beginning and funny at the end awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God that was hot and soooo GOOD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol I was laughing so hard I started to cry! Thank you for the awesome read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just great James drugged her just as she was getting closer to Edward. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow she can not catch a break with him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow so Edward is a little mixed up...and an ass to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story! I laughed and I cried. I'm so glad he went an got her because there was no other way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED your fic. You had great continuity and flow throughout most of the story. The only area that I found troublesome was chapter 40. It was very confusing to figure out when we were and what was going on. The answers to those questions weren't answered until much later, causing them to not have as strong of an effect. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story, I really enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Found it yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story! I'm glad it only took 3 weeks vs months for Edward to come to his senses! |
![]() ![]() Yay you updated your profile! Hopefully you'll start writing again: ) |