Reviews for Private Tutor |
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![]() ![]() wooooooow okay. this chapter REALLY annoyed me. first of all, the girls sound REALLY conceited "we are waaay sexier", like wtf okay bitch, relax. secondly, apparently the karaoke bar was full of slutty girls since that's all they talked about. which makes no sense because THEY'RE the ones who started molesting their ice cream cones on stage (which is pretty unoriginal and lame since the song is called ice cream don't you think?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story of yours is way too awesome! I cried so much after reading about their I have always been the sentimental kind but I have never cried while reading a 's how good your story made me cry. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liked it ! Glad Edward got his head outta his ass ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, I usually don't review a story, except maybe sometimes at the very end because I try to only read complete stories, so quite often they are older. (I just don't have the patience to wait for updates, and get incredibly dissapointed if a story I'm following ends up abandoned, lol.) That being said, I just have to say that this story has just captured my attention like no other. Well written, good story plot. I can't wait to finish it & look forward to reading others by you! Great job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() really liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was just right for them, after all when was anything ever straight forward with them. I have really enjoyed this story, there's been a good balance with humour, romance, lemons and a little bit of angst. Thank you for all your hard work, hope life is being good to you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The wedding was great, you did fool me I really wasn't sure what she was getting ready for, every time I suspected you threw me off the scent again! Loved the reminiscing about Emmet at the airport, that was so funny. Loved it. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great, love a happy ending, looking forward to the epilogue, will we hear about the families reaction to Edward? He really does need to suffer a bit more...not too much though! Love the story, thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must admit to mixed feelings, I am glad they are back together but there is a lingering feeling of hurt there towards Edward, he can't just fix this easily. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm, might forgive you ...we'll see! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh God, what an idiot ! On what planet was that ever going to be a good idea? I saw it coming but kept hoping he wasn't going to go all 'New Moon'. I can't wait to see how they work this out, will Bella work it out? Great chapter by the way, thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear, I hope they actually can talk to each other and avoid this heartache. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm wondering what Jasper, Emmet and Rosalie are up to... Stealing Edwards Karma Sutra perhaps? Carlisle is a wise man, great advice! Very sexy. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Emmet is hilarious! Poor Bella! Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the gifts, I think I need some privacy to calm down now...phew. |