|Reviews for Motion Sickness|
| EL0NI chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
This is one of my favourite NatsuxLucy fics.
| Emerald-Pokey chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I AM BEGGING YOU TO MAKE A SCEOND AND THRID CHAPTER. MAKE IT LIKE THEIR ON THEIR JOB AND THEN LUCY GETS INTO THIS HUGE FIGHT AND NASTU COMES TO SAVE HER OR SOMTHIN. PLZ PLZ PLZ
| Schyzotypal X chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
cute story. I like the concept and the way it's written. Keep up the good work.
| ryoumi yatsu chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
nice story i hope you make another one
| Atemu'sLotus chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
That was SO ADORABLE!
You did a wonderful job!
Thank you so much for writing! :D
| A Cat of the Canals chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
OMG THIS IS SO AMAZINGLY GREAT. I was looking for a natsuxerza story, but i clicked on yours because it sounded interesting. it wasnt just interesting... its FANTASTIC. keep up this awsm work! ill be keeping an eye out for your work! D
| Seltap chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
This was too adorable! Loved the kissing and when he kept saying that she smelled nice.
Lovely little ficlet of yours~
| downfromhell chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
omg, this story completely rocked!
it gave me goosebumps all over my bodyy!
| Iloveanime9493 chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
kawii! tht was awesome! i luv it!
| Demichy chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
SQUEE! That was such a cute moment between Lucy and Natsu. Great work!
| alwayslost123 chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
love just pure love XD
| Fukyuu no Tenshi chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
One of the cutest fics Iv'e read in a long time. :]
| Mikk1o5 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
OMFG I loved this so much! :)
| 5265742755 chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
I, the beta-reader of doom, shall give constructive criticism on your story! *cue stupid evil bad-guy music*
I thought the story was very well thought out. I didn't want to stop reading and the characters and situations where all believable. Very well written indeed. :3
Things to work on:
I didn't notice spelling or grammar that took away from the story but one thing did bother me. The ending. I could tell you where leading up to something in the very last paragraph but when the end came, I didn't see it. It's like something got cut off. Was he dreaming that whole thing or did it really happen.
((He just had to ask. “Lucy, are you wearing a scent?”
She shook her head, eying him curiously. “No, not today, why?”
“Didn’t I tell you?” Natsu asked, grinning mischievously. “You smell nice.”))
The "No, not today." thing is what threw me.
Sorry if I seemed to be picking on you but that was truly the only thing I noticed. :3 I'm so going to check out that chapter story.
| Negative Hummingbird chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
-fangirl squeal- that was so cute! -