Reviews for Motion Sickness
EL0NI chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
This is one of my favourite NatsuxLucy fics.
Emerald-Pokey chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
I AM BEGGING YOU TO MAKE A SCEOND AND THRID CHAPTER. MAKE IT LIKE THEIR ON THEIR JOB AND THEN LUCY GETS INTO THIS HUGE FIGHT AND NASTU COMES TO SAVE HER OR SOMTHIN. PLZ PLZ PLZ
Schyzotypal X chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
cute story. I like the concept and the way it's written. Keep up the good work.
ryoumi yatsu chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
nice story i hope you make another one
Atemu'sLotus chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
Aw...

That was SO ADORABLE!

You did a wonderful job!

Thank you so much for writing! :D
A Cat of the Canals chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
OMG THIS IS SO AMAZINGLY GREAT. I was looking for a natsuxerza story, but i clicked on yours because it sounded interesting. it wasnt just interesting... its FANTASTIC. keep up this awsm work! ill be keeping an eye out for your work! D

~Tohru
Seltap chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
This was too adorable! Loved the kissing and when he kept saying that she smelled nice.

Lovely little ficlet of yours~
downfromhell chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
omg, this story completely rocked!

it gave me goosebumps all over my bodyy!
Iloveanime9493 chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
kawii! tht was awesome! i luv it!

~Peace out!~
Demichy chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
SQUEE! That was such a cute moment between Lucy and Natsu. Great work!
alwayslost123 chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
love just pure love XD
Fukyuu no Tenshi chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
One of the cutest fics Iv'e read in a long time. :]
Mikk1o5 chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
OMFG I loved this so much! :)
5265742755 chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
I, the beta-reader of doom, shall give constructive criticism on your story! *cue stupid evil bad-guy music*

Good:

I thought the story was very well thought out. I didn't want to stop reading and the characters and situations where all believable. Very well written indeed. :3

Things to work on:

I didn't notice spelling or grammar that took away from the story but one thing did bother me. The ending. I could tell you where leading up to something in the very last paragraph but when the end came, I didn't see it. It's like something got cut off. Was he dreaming that whole thing or did it really happen.

((He just had to ask. “Lucy, are you wearing a scent?”

She shook her head, eying him curiously. “No, not today, why?”

“Didn’t I tell you?” Natsu asked, grinning mischievously. “You smell nice.”))

The "No, not today." thing is what threw me.

Done!

Sorry if I seemed to be picking on you but that was truly the only thing I noticed. :3 I'm so going to check out that chapter story.

TCT
Negative Hummingbird chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
-fangirl squeal- that was so cute! -
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