Reviews for Motion Sickness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ur such an amazing writer it makes me cryyyyyy. Jk but seriously. U r so. Amazing. I lov ur work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You captured Natsu, Gray, Lucy, and Erza's personalities perfectly. I love how you describe the way Gray and Natsu fly to one another like opposite ends of a magnet, that's really creative and fresh. Also the interaction with Erza was spot on in character. Lucy's grumpiness was also very in character. I love how Natsu fainted, that's just amazing. XD This is a great story. You are a great author. Are you going to publish any real literary works? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hiro-sensei seriously needs to read this story. You're awesome. |
![]() ![]() I loved it! I love it when Natsu's scent is included in stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am in love with this story! please make another chapter or a seaqual. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww u should write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow - that was lovely! I love the way you described the scent, and Natsu was a fantastic character in this. I was also kind of blown away by your brilliant handling of the character interactions; you managed to keep everything light-hearted, original and entertaining while still managing to stay true to everyone's character. I will definitely be reading more of your work after this. Your characterisation is nearing flawlessness. I mean, especially with Lucy; I really really like her in this piece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly love your writing! It flows so nicely and you capture the characters so well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It actually happened right? Please tell me it did! |
![]() ![]() ![]() KYAAAAAAAAAAA! SOO FRREEEAKINGGA AWEESSSOME! |
![]() ![]() I thought that they were gonna ... You know XD greatest Lucy healing nastu story ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I reaf this because of the word: lock, or locker?, room. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() nicee, enjoyed it alot and i know how much you hate comments on stuff like "update" etc. but is this a one shot or will there be more to it coz i really enjoyed this! |