Reviews for Future sun
Ty chapter 12 . 11/20/2014
I think you should add more to this story I really enjoyed it i would focus on how Bella knows midnight and possibly a relationship between midnight and Edward
milagglad chapter 12 . 8/21/2014
Me gusta, sigue adelante
diamond.jones.733450 chapter 3 . 6/29/2014
Awesome
Deathbender's Vamwolf chapter 12 . 5/25/2014
Love the story but to be honest, that last part about Midnight and Alicia, I don't get. That part where Bella was having a very hard of controlling so she didn't send them into the fire had me dying of laughter. Who are the new girls? Why does Bella have a very hard time remembering them?
Guest chapter 7 . 4/24/2014
It was brilliant, all until you revealed her (Isabella's) special power was of things control...

I was disgusted, it was simply far too good for her, it was disgusting...
Guest chapter 4 . 4/24/2014
Argh you use the word forever in such a blase manner!

Forever...and Forever, to the depth of Hades, past eternal torture of damnation, nothing matters but you...

Everything else is dying, pitiful, without purpose in my eyes...

You are my world, you are my eternity, you are my forever :)
Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 12 . 2/14/2014
Great story, I'm curious to the two new arrivals and it they're trouble?
I. W. Cullen chapter 7 . 1/18/2014
LOL her inner dialogue about walking Edward into a fire made me laugh very funny.
Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
:)(: Nice start. It's sweet that they couldn't make Alice leave Bella like that.
yoli1994 chapter 12 . 11/17/2013
i am curious about epilogue :) what happen later?
BeastOfTheSea chapter 11 . 9/9/2013
Hooray! Bella is much better off with Alice, anyway. :)

The spelling and grammar could use some work, but I liked the plot. Good to see Edward getting called out on some of his behavior, and Bella finding happiness with someone other than Mr. YourSoulIsDamnedAngstAngst. :P Off to read your other stories!
TaliaFosness chapter 2 . 8/19/2013
shit just got real!
Annoying Pixie chapter 3 . 4/19/2013
so good
lakiesha.tealjones chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
Wait what website? That was a great chapter
Smayz chapter 12 . 7/14/2011
This is an amazing story. I have never been more glad that Jake wasn't included. I liked how you made Edward seem irrational and immature at times, but smoothed it over with his acceptance.
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