Reviews for The Hard Feeling
WaddleBuff chapter 3 . 7/30/2014
Lacks finesse and adequate description for a good lemon. You use anatomical terms in the least subtle way possible (I.e. Penis, vagina), which in turn detracts from the readers pleasure.

It's been a while so please rewrite this or something. It's very sub par.
Joda-Eragonsson chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Looool Room 69 I see what you've done there
PokemonMasterAsh chapter 5 . 10/9/2013
"Next chapter! Next chapter! Next chapter! Next chapter." Said CholoboShoka's fans.
SuperSonic156 chapter 5 . 12/27/2012
All I can say is...HOLY FUCK!

That was the first time I have read something so descriptive.
SuperSonic156 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
"Room sixty nine,"

Ah,what the fuck!
OtakuuMikuu chapter 3 . 12/22/2012
I enjoy reading this story
brompton.pikachuu chapter 3 . 10/2/2012
its great but one question are you a pervert ?
Brandorable chapter 5 . 8/16/2012
how old are they? please be over 18!
BlazingLegend chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
I know I'm really selfish and bad but I get really confused when you don't use their English names
Guest chapter 5 . 2/21/2012
well going head first like he always does isn't very smart to do x rated thing... well know he knows ['and knowing is half the battle G.I. JOE']
beastmode953 chapter 5 . 12/20/2011
I expected Delia to react like that. Shes way too sweet to get angry at may. Maybe they can all even live together in pallet
beastmode953 chapter 4 . 12/20/2011
Ahaha Damn thank you for updating today so I didn't have to wait so long to know what happened. That's messed ul bricks still a virgin lol. He could've paid a hooker
beastmode953 chapter 3 . 12/20/2011
So was may a virgin too?if not please don't say drew.
beastmode953 chapter 2 . 12/20/2011
Lol he doesn't know what a condom is come on. And I would think may would be a little annoyed that he's seen her Jakes oh well. Finally he's getting some
beastmode953 chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Wth what was max and Brock doing there? And lol 69
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