|Reviews for Hitomi's Awakening|
| REAL chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
Hmmm... Decent... i'll give you that.
Odyssey of Kasumi was UNREADABLE! IT WAS SO ABSURD! It was what a low budget hardcore amateur porno movie was in real life, bad quality, no story and no proficiency in intercourse... This... nah... I always like to see character development...
I read another one the other day... I think it was called kasumi business woman extraordinare... That was the WORST ONE! I MEAN ... MAN... YOU THINK THAT WRITTER FINDS ADAM ROSE TO BE FUN, WITH HIS EXOTIC EXPRESS!
Odyssey Kasumi is a very close 2nd to that...
This... um... 4/10 AT THE VERY BEST!
Sorry, but I have seen A LOT to know what good description is,
Even when helena swallowed... a woman good at it would do a few more little things to tripple the pleasure of it...
just a hint.
| shaianwillems chapter 2 . 2/9/2014
This was a very good read, I love the story so far and the sex scenes where amazing, looking forward too chapter 3. :-D
| bobby flynn chapter 2 . 7/19/2013
Awesome read dude. Where's ch3 at?
| alex dee chapter 2 . 7/19/2013
Please update soon this story really rocks
| RandomReader11 chapter 2 . 5/20/2012
Holy crap, please do update.
| Aisuhime Shiro chapter 2 . 11/18/2011
your story was amazing. i really enjoyed it. i hope to see more from you :). great story. loved it 3
| Lupus7 chapter 2 . 6/1/2011
And this hasn't been updated why? You pick hitomi, my favorite character, and then don't update? That makes me sad.
| MasterSaruwatari chapter 2 . 4/7/2009
This is already getting good. Man, I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work my friend.
| Straight Edge Queen chapter 2 . 3/29/2009
I love it! Please continue!
| Fonkirby chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
Well a scene with Helena and Hitomi would be rather epic. They are my two favorite characters respectively [sorry Hitomi but Helena's hotter imo .] Reading this has also aided me in what can be uploaded to this site. It is also good to see more yuri scenes [I despise any sex scene with a dude in it, I guess I just can't stand my own gender?] anyway great chapter and keep up the good work.
| d chapter 2 . 1/8/2009
there are few people that i know who can write good smut, and you're one of them. i hope you'll update soon.
| ReaperXIII chapter 2 . 11/18/2008
Don't stop! This is getting good.
| RedTheReaper chapter 2 . 9/9/2008
I'm loving this so far! How about some strap-on sex? That would be nice! Like Ayane screwing Lei-Fang up the butt while Lei sucks off Tina? Just an idea, hope the next chapter comes soon!
| galactic hunter chapter 2 . 9/7/2008
hurry up with chapters 3 and 4!
| Guardian 777 chapter 2 . 8/13/2008
Please Update soon! this story kicks ass, and I want more [no pun intended:)] and is the next lemon gonna be w/ Hitomi? PLEASE UPDATE!