Reviews for Trunks and Goten's Excellent Adventure |
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![]() ![]() Oh an evil cliff hanger. Hurry with the next part, Please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh heh heh. THIS should be interesting. Very good and funny story so far. |
![]() ![]() Oh my god!This is so exciting. Please continue with the story!It is very good! You're doing a wonderful job.. |
![]() ![]() Oh way cool. I so want to read chapter five. Till then. |
![]() ![]() Sweet story-That last part with Trunks and Nappa was COOL! Muhahaha... I don't really think Trunks is cool but since he's related to Vegeta I guess I have to... The prince of all Saiyans kicked Hui Hui's butt in the first level of the space ship... Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah... |
![]() ![]() Keep Writing! |
![]() ![]() So good! Write more! I gotta know how everyone reacts to the Chibi's Awsome powers and the fact that Vegeta's Trunks' father! Mua ha ha! |
![]() ![]() very nice story. goten and trunks are so cute! please don't stop with this story halfway, like so many other authors do! |
![]() ![]() You have to hurry with the next part. I want to read more Goten! He's such a cutie! |
![]() ![]() You have to hurry with the next part. I want to read more Goten! He's such a cutie! |
![]() ![]() hey, great story, they are just sooooooo adorable, can't wait for the rest |
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![]() ![]() Hey wow that was pretty cool. _ Trunks and Goten are in trouble now! You wrote this very well, I really want to read the next part. Please hurry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sounds awsome so far! I luv it! Go Goten! Go Trunks! Those are the most kawaii bunch of chibi's i have ever seen. The desevre to have their own little adventure! - |