Reviews for Neverland
Lost O'Fallon Girl chapter 12 . 10/11/2013
I liked it, open ending or not LOL
IncredibleMadamPenguin chapter 12 . 6/3/2012
You said you wanted more reviews so here's one from me to you.

I really loved your story a lot, but the ending kinda leaves you on the spot.

Maybe a sequel or two would do.

I really like the way you write.

Well this is it i'm saying goodnight.

Well i hope you liked my poem. It was an accident at first. Ne way i thought if u did do the sequel thing, it would be great if Peter ended up being put in juevey or something and is released when he's 16 again. Then he goes to find Wendy, who never left Neverland, and finds out he got Wendy prego 16 yrs ago. And for actiony bits you could do something like Hook's replacement also finds out about Wendy and her kid and goes after the kid to get back at Wendy and Peter for killing Hook. I would write this myslef, sinse i've obviously put a lot of thought into it, but it was your story so me writing the one i thought up would be theft. Enjoy :)
mysticrox123 chapter 12 . 7/1/2011
I have read this story many times, but I have yet to review, so I'm sorry for that.

I love this story. I don't usually go for crime fics, but I have made an exception for this one ;)

The ending was beautiful: I get a tear in my eye every time I read it.

Happr writing/reading :) x
Rin Koorbloh chapter 6 . 12/12/2009
haha, i like the end-makeout scene, it was funny how calm both of the guys were XD "you two scared nibbs..." genious!
kasmira36 chapter 11 . 2/25/2009
I had read this story but never made a review as its genre was not my type.

Anyway, I must say, you've improved a lot of your writing, more considerable for how to make the story go. However, I personally disagreed with your A/N,

'I had taken out the details of that night, because I wanted them to keep their "innocence".'

From what SHE had been through especially in Chapter 8, I wonder if SHE could still have kept HER 'innocence'.

Just a comment, not a critic. Sorry if it upset you.
Boogaz-Rayden-Xavier chapter 8 . 12/14/2008
I was browsing the stories and i came across this one and I usually look at the reviews first before I give it a read. I started at chapter 8 and I like what I just read. That sounds realistic. Though horrible to be raped, but at some point the body will betray and feel pleasure and pain. Nice work. I like the gang thing. I'm going to read the other chapters :). Nice...
Fennelwink chapter 8 . 9/23/2008
Ok, I was enjoying this story. I really was. Until you implied that Wendy actually enjoyed being raped. You lost me. Believability out the window. I know there are some people that enjoy pain, but come on! This isn't porn land where absolutely everything is sexy. Fear, pain, and constant dry friction of delicate skin does not lead to orgasm.
crazymel2008 chapter 7 . 9/11/2008
please update asap