|Reviews for WITCH Swordmaster|
| XV-Dragon chapter 14 . 1/12/2012
Nerisa seems to have a habit of kill key people in WITCH's lives...bet she is going to wish ITCH had the same limitations in theor style Will has because I think its only Will's that has the avoidince on killing.
Can't wait to see your next update yellow because the next fight is going to be intersting :)
| Philip Gipson chapter 14 . 1/11/2012
I.T.C.H. is feeling the pain of loss over some of their family members. That's good. They need to get that pain out in the open if they wanna take down Nerissa forever. But they need Will's guidance.
| ThePink1 at Reefside.Net chapter 13 . 11/26/2011
"Well, all's well that ends well ..."
"It's not over yet, Irmy," Cornelia smirked.
"It is for Orube," Hay said, frowning. Then she perked back up again. "Hey, think the blond girl and her friend are Elly and 'Randa?"
"Shhhh!" Will told her with a grin. Yellow'll sell ya into slavery next story if you give out any more plot points!" Taranee gave the redhead an evil glance, then sighed.
"You're probably right, Will. It's about the only thing the authors haven't done ... to ..." She broke off with a snort. "Too late, girls. 'Into the Arena', rem?" They all started laughing, and it got even louder when Hay started waving around Irma's picture of Ben Tennyson, muttering 'It's Hero Time!' in a falsetto bass.
"Well, all I can tell Yellow is the fight scene was all right," Cornelia said finally. "If he really wants to spice up his sword-writing, he'll either have to go A J and Irma's route and sign up for a fencing class, or at least download the lexicon of jargon."
"Hey, at least we're willing to learn something more than improved ways to throw mudpies, Corny," Irma sassed.
"DON'T CALL ME ..!"
"Reviewing," Will sighed, and clicked the button.
Heh, sorry about that, Yellow. I actually do recommend the class if you can get to one though. It was informative, ... and FUN! Catch ya on the flipside, A J & friends.
| Heart of the Demons chapter 13 . 11/25/2011
Sorry again for not reading chapters twelve and thirteen of "W.I.T.C.H.: Swordmaster." I've been preoccupied with other stuff. But, I got around to reading the chapters today, and both are awesome. Now that Will's finished her training and she and the other girls are healed physically and mentally, they're ready to take on Nerissa and her minions. I can't wait to see what they've got in the next chapters.
| TTigerz chapter 13 . 11/20/2011
Are you nuts? The fight was great!
Though I have to say, I never thought you would kill Orube... But really, really great! I just can't wait for the next one! Will it be the conclusion or will you extend the final fight?
Anyway, great job!
| XV-Dragon chapter 12 . 9/2/2011
Guess Kenshin is Will's next challange...here is hoping all the trainingwith the others can help her get the Heart of her Diciplne from him.
| TTigerz chapter 12 . 9/2/2011
Hay-Lin has been the nicest teacher by far. Though maybe a bit sadistic. Now Will has finished all her training. What will happen next?
I don't know but I really want to!
| Philip Gipson chapter 11 . 8/7/2011
Will did great with Cornelia, despite some setbacks. I'd say the redhead is just about on her way to mastering herself physically and mentally.
| TTigerz chapter 11 . 8/6/2011
I LOVE Cornelia! This was fantastic! I totally get Will's anger. I know how I feel whenever I have to do push ups... Love it!
Yet, I'm sad that Yan-Lin died... Hay-Lin will want revenge for that...
Great Chapter! Keep the coming!
| XV-Dragon chapter 11 . 8/6/2011
Still unsure if the presses are meant ot build Will's strength or just so Conrelia could boss her aroud lol! Hay lin aint going to be happy when she finds ut what happened to Yan Lin...she might kill Berissa before Will can evne fight her!
Can't wait to see the next chapters at least it will be the gentle sensie this time around...I hope :)
| Heart of the Demons chapter 10 . 7/21/2011
Things got a bit...HOT during Will's training, but the dear lass made it through unscathed. Once her mastery of the elements is complete, Will will be able to face any opponent.
| TTigerz chapter 10 . 7/11/2011
I love it how you've made Will learn about the Fire discipline. I just find it harsh that you killed Anna as well... I think that when W.I.T.C.H. comes to that they are going to want their vengeance badly.
| XV-Dragon chapter 10 . 7/10/2011
Another elemtn down, now she just needs to get past Hay Lin and Cornelia...the first being thr eiaser of the two but not sure how Will is going to mesh with Conry.
| Philip Gipson chapter 9 . 7/4/2011
Well-written chapter with Will's training and Nerissa's rampage. Nerissa won't hesitate in killing people, even innocent children. Will training with Irma paid off intriguingly. Yet, she's still got a long way to go.
| XV-Dragon chapter 9 . 7/1/2011
Another lesson down and just two more to go I think. Hope Will can master the skills so she can embrace the the heart of her style and get the sword from Kenshin, Great update Yellow :D