Reviews for Their first time
Meyer-Madness chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
I liked that they both were so nervous but Bella took control (Go Bella!). Even ol Eddie wishing that he was Jake was funny, he is such a tortured soul. Edward does treat Bella like she is glass and I guess that would annoy me too, but I think it was an accurate portrayal. I like that once they started, he became confident that he could never hurt her and was determined to change her to a vampire (if only for his own selfish reasons, lol). I didnt know he had it in him, ol' sly dog. I like the inner monologue and Edward's ability to get over himself and all of his doubts.
dazzled01218 chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
aw. so romantic..
rapink93 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
This was cute and I enjoyed reading it!