Reviews for The Eye of the Storm
Mary Mab chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Lol haha love just wow yeah that's the eye if the storm... Nice and hey it's us nice girls that the guys have to fear for we are fiery inferno s just waiting for someone to discover... ;p ;) ;p
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
BXE bella and edward

EmXR emmeett and rose

EsXC esme and carlise

AXJ jas and ali

JXB jacob and bella (evil)

these are also called "cannon pairings"
AliciaCullen1901 chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Don't worry when i started fanfiction it took me awhile to figure out what canon couples and non canon meant. then the BxE JxA EmxR and ExC. Sad really. But i got smarter at it lol
random person chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
good job.

yeah certain fanfic things sill confuse me. If anyone reads my review and wants to help me out what does OOC OCC OC and AU mean?

BxE yeah means Edward and Bella. How did u figure it out anyway?

lol and I really like the whole Make love,not war lol it sounds like something Emmett would yell out at a random time anywhere lol.

anyway yeah good story.
Melissa612 chapter 1 . 11/5/2008, I get confused about some of the fanfiction language to. It took me forever to figure out with DTE (Dirty Talking Edward) meant. I kept going through all the charters and almost gave up but then it just clicked as I was reading a story. Anyway I love the whole "make love, not war". Emmett is my favorite. If you had time though I would space between dialog to make it easier to read but other than that great job for not writing one in 3 years. : )
dazzled01218 chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
nice. lol

BxE DOES mean Bella and Edward lol

Make Love, Not War! D
Ms.Ginny Snape chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
'“I told you they were gonna make up.” Alice tried to say quietly. “That’s right!” Emmet yelled for them to hear, “Make love, not war!” Edward chuckled as Bella blushed down to her toes.'

HAHAHA! Have a cookie. (Reaches into magical bag of wonder and grabs a cookie out.) (~_~)

meus carus chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
Lol, hilarious ending. And yes BXE means bella and edward! LOL
carlysweety chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
LOL! This is really good! The spacing could use some work... Just remember that after one speaker speaks there is a line break when another speaker starts to speak. _ Im not trying to be mean.. Im only trying to help! I love the story anyway! Keep writing! D
supernatural-princess17 chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Make love, not war. that's funny. a little weird but hey i'm weird so good job
Sporkedd chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
yes BxE is Bella and Edward :)

thats okay, it took me weeks to figure out what AU meant and then it hit me one day lol

anyways good story :) i liked it :)
All.The.Pretty.Corpses chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
lol, that was funny!
GoodyGoody23 chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
A good story, and BxE does mean Bella and Edward. If you got that then you can figure out that the other letters mean other characters. Like BxJ means Bella and Jacob or Bella and Jasper. All of our fan fiction-speak gets a little confusing. :) I loved the story, it was great. You have a talent for writing. :)