Reviews for A New Start
Sparkly Blue Eyes chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Uh oh. Bobby's in trouble... Hopefully Evelyn, Jerry and Angel will see past the serious misunderstanding of a scene. Fingers crossed. Poor Jack, as if moving into a new home isn't hard enough he had to come face to face with a drunken Bobby? Oops. Loving Jack's character by the way, very true and close to what i assume a younger version of himself would be, at least he has Evelyn; obviously he doesn't know it yet but that woman's going to take real good care of him. First chapter in girl and I like it, the writing style is just perfect by the way :)
iheartlife chapter 4 . 3/4/2011
I know it's been a while but please update! Such a great story!
Sparks Diamond chapter 4 . 2/19/2009
Awesome story! Update real soon!
lovePEOPLEandCOWBOY chapter 4 . 2/18/2009
i want know the jack's past. I look for the next chapter.
Ghostwriter chapter 4 . 2/17/2009
Ah, cute. Catch ya on the flip side.
nickdra chapter 3 . 12/22/2008
WOW please continue with this story soon good job
Rammy-x chapter 3 . 9/20/2008
wait.. so im a little confused, Angel pinned him against the wall, but then fell back asleep and forgot her had Jack in a death grip?

sorry! it was good though! it made me smile when he hugged Angel! it was so adorable!


Rammy-x chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
ahh, damn, what a situation? wow, thats really gotta suck!


its good, kina uhh... freaky, but it was catchy, and a good read!

on to chapter 2, and beyond!


lovePEOPLEandCOWBOY chapter 3 . 9/19/2008
angel est somnambule, pas de chance alors... Pauvre jack. j'attends la suite.
AC7DC chapter 3 . 9/19/2008
Wonderful story! Poor Jack, everybody jumps on him... Wonder what will happen when Jeremy finds out...

Please update soon!
ShadowWolfDagger chapter 3 . 9/18/2008
Awesome update like always please update it soon _

vincents1lover chapter 3 . 9/18/2008
Dutch92 chapter 3 . 9/18/2008
Omg super awesome! Cant wait for more!
charming2drew chapter 3 . 9/18/2008

Poor Jack, and poor Angel.

I hope everything turns out well!


This was a pretty damn awesome chapter!
The Flea chapter 2 . 9/13/2008
great story! please update as soon as you can!
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