Reviews for The Road Not Taken
skowler chapter 12 . 4/29/2010
Well written, certainly worth continuing. Looking forward to the next chapters
erasmus.locke chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
The romance isn't believable. A "whoa, where did that come from" moment doesn't happen for most people when meeting a stranger; usually one forms opinions on first seeing (or in a Force user's perspective, sensing) the person.

Your dialogue shows lack of continuity, as well. There are responses that don't follow from pervious questions.

I like the idea of the story, but the execution lacks polish.
Sonny23 chapter 11 . 9/11/2009
I liked Tionne in the books and am finding this story quite interesting. Despite the fact that Mara Jade is my favourite Star Wars character and I love the Luke-Mara Jade love story, I love this story.

I can't wait to see what happens.
SW1991 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Very Well done! I would like to see where this heads to.