Reviews for Individual Couplets
CeruleanKiss chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
Haha aw, cute
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Hahah, brilliant! Your rhyming was fantastic.
Gyarii chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
This was really good!
Jordan chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
(Cackles) I'm no Shakespeare, but I know talent when I see it! Great job!
Suspicious Soup chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Wow. This is good. it's way better than anything that i can cook up. Lol.
Akire-Otos chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
xD

THAT WAS THE BEST HOENNSHIPPING ONE SHOT I'VE READ IN THE LONGEST TIME.

Hahaha, no, really, that was really well written.

And it was really cute, too!

Awesome stuff here...:DD
Unknown chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Love the rhyming! Wonderfull story and brilliant idea! That was really funny, making them speak in rhyme!
Sefirosukuraodo chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
KAWAII! THIS IS SO SWEET IT MAKES SUGAR TASTE JUST LIKE SALT!
Commander Cody chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
While I love any good Brendan/May fic, I have to say that this one stands out among them, due in large part to the poetry angle. I've seen plain-vanilla poems before, but it's not every day that you see an actual story that seamlessly blends poetic and prose language. I suppose I can't truly judge the poetic element, seeing as I'm probably even less of a "real" poet than you are, but as far as I'm concerned, it's A-OK!

Everything else is pretty good, too. No visible mechanical errors, the narrative as a whole is cohesive... nope, no problems here! I suppose there is an element of mood-whiplash, in that they continue to speak in verse even in the more serious part toward the end, but it still manages to work. You've managed to gain my attention with your recent Pokemon-based works; I sincerely hope to see more in the future.
Phantom shadow mask chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
its about time _
Jarkes chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Interesting.

No, unfortunately, Brendan is NOT in the anime. T_T