|Reviews for Through other eyes|
| MaxDark chapter 5 . 10/24/2009
I love your story. Cyrus was one of my favlorite characters in from Dinotopia (second to Zippo). This story is wonderful and ylou made it easy for readers to understand the two new characters, Jessie and Seth (who I absolutely like!). Continue, please.
| Shichimon chapter 5 . 8/12/2008
Well, for someone whose English is their second language you do a pretty amazing job of writing in it! What's your first language, if you don't mind my asking (actually, after reading your profile I'm hazarding a guess at German?) You have a great sense of style and pacing, the dialogue is fresh and interesting, and though there are a few slip ups in spelling and grammar it's nothing to worry about!
If you do have any queries you want help with, I'd be glad to beta-read (and though I've never done it before - I'll happily give it a go if you want)
PS. Love the way your comments at the end of chapters seem to get angrier and angrier ;p