|Reviews for King Who Lived|
| whats up with jeremiah chapter 23 . 3/12
Hey there! I know I'm a little slow on the uptake, considering that this story hasn't been updated in about forever and a half, but I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your story.
I think your characterization - especially of the OCs (since so many people just don't get it right) - is brilliant. I especially love how you've done Chris, and your talent really shows through in this chapter with his attempted "reconciliation" with Harry. Each character is so dynamic, in their interests and motives, and actions are never left explained with "oh, uh, he did that 'cuz he's just evil".
I also love how you weave such cool plot elements into the story, which are original and, for the most part, mix fluidly with the story's premise. There are a few things that had me scratching my head or that, to me, just didn't seem to fit in that well (like the Fairy dancing ring). However, they're few and far between. For the most part, the narrative melds really nicely with the canon elements.
Anywho, this story has been distracting me from a bad cold I've had and I just wanted to share my appreciation!
| paskinmath chapter 19 . 2/4
I love the les mis reference of prisoner 24601. Your story is wonderful thus far!
| Guest chapter 23 . 12/18/2013
How do they know that it isn't someone else's blood? How do they know it is even human blood? Or don't they know and just assume?
| Benedictchua chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
horrible horrible grammer
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/16/2013
A most impressive first performance
| Popofthetop chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Love the story hope you update it soon.
| nyxaurora chapter 19 . 11/17/2013
A Les Miserables reference? You just keep getting better and better.
| Assad chapter 13 . 11/13/2013
You know unless Sirius is in prison for a different crime James and lily are alive so they could tell who the real secret keeper was
| SAT Champ chapter 7 . 11/13/2013
Abdicate is a SAT word and nice story
| MeinNameIstHase chapter 16 . 11/12/2013
So apparently it is Lily, who is manipulating Harry's life against him, maybe because he is a Parselmouth or maybe for some other reason. But I'm at a loss when trying to understand her agenda. More information, please?
| Guest chapter 24 . 11/6/2013
I like stories, where Harry becomes some kind of Lord and this then produces more problems than are solved. Those are not that many and not easy to find. Your skilled writing is also an huge bonus. Thank you for sharing.
| Shadow315 chapter 24 . 11/1/2013
I like the story, pissed that Skeeter was still able to write horrible stories about Harry. Where were his guards? Doesn't he have a secretary or people to make statements, to get the Prophet to apologize or something?
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/23/2013
I do believe this is the first time Ihave heard someone insuate that Umbitch turns her victims into cats, slighly suprising
| Tigerwolvesvixen chapter 24 . 10/16/2013
please please continue i love your story alot its awesome
| Kaylen Cooper chapter 24 . 9/28/2013
Started reading this years ago, but never really got too far into it.
Found it again, and decided to make my way through the whole lot. Absolutely glad I did, as it's brilliant!
Loved it, and looking forward to reading more when you continue. :)