Reviews for King Who Lived
You suck chapter 7 . 7/30/2013
You suck. Your grammar and punctuation need a lot of work.
MsParthenopaeus chapter 19 . 7/16/2013
Loved the Les Mis hidden reference :)
deathlover25 chapter 24 . 7/3/2013
devo342 chapter 2 . 6/17/2013
Chuffers244 chapter 24 . 6/12/2013
I just wanted to say how I really enjoy reading this story, the plot is awesome :) I assume it is really difficult updating and stuff but anyway best story ever! I'm going to uni next year...just finished the last of my A levels yay schools out for ever! Anyway...
I have a few questions though (sorry!)
1. Will the wizarding world find out about Harry's home life?
2. I was a bit confused is Chris the true BWL or is it harry?
3. Does Lily really care about her son or is she just obsessed with her other kids?
I know you have probably answered these questions but I just forget.
If I could make a suggestion? Could harry have an unusual familiar... not a phoenix that is way over used! I think that would enhance the plot a bit... maybe a really magical animal i donno like a unicorn or a dragon or something.. You DONT have to use this idea I just thought it might be good.
I know that it is probably likely you will not update this read the author note at the top but I will still be hopeful :) Also I read you work on Patchwork and I agree its better than your fanfics but then its written in a different style...
So enough rambling and questions from me!
Thanks for one of the best HP "king" storys on FF!
Nemhain2009 chapter 24 . 6/3/2013
I have visited your Patchworkfellows tumblr account and read "In Which Melly Believes in God. Maybe." I share many of your thoughts and feelings and wanted to thank you for posting them so eloquently in ways I don't have the words to express. I grew up in a Southern Baptist family; I questioned so many things in the Bible growing up and have come to different conclusions than the rest of my family and community. I still believe in God, but one who is hands off when it comes to our lives, and who doesn't care about our sexuality. This has invited scorn from some, but I would like to think that God would want us to question and learn. Again, thank you!
Yshu chapter 24 . 5/31/2013
Great story, thank you. eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Guest chapter 11 . 5/25/2013
I love this Chapter
jewelcrystal chapter 23 . 5/13/2013
Hiya! I remember I said in a previous review that Glory was growing on me. And you replied that her character has baffled you. I see great potential in her to grow up. What I see for her character is this: She grows slowly closer to Harry and be the bridge between the twins that will eventually reconcile them. Right now she's childish and immature but with all the challenges thrown her way she'll grow up fast and since I believe she's not as set in her ways as Chris is towards treating Harry as nobody, she'll be by Harry's side when she does get to know him as the older brother she never took the time to get to know. And I imagine Harry being the quintessential older brother to Glory when she was maybe 3 years old or 5 years old. And I can also see a potential for a flashback wherein their parents were too wrapped up in Chris that, although they do notice Glory, as a toddler she had had to rely on Harry's guidance most as Chris still garnered most of the attention. It would be Harry who played with her. This is the reason I like Glory; She could be the only blood relative of Harry that would give him a sense of family.
21Orphans chapter 11 . 4/20/2013
I really do hope you don't have harry being his family's whipping boy for to much longer because I probably couldn't stand it for to long.
HexyMama chapter 14 . 4/14/2013
I hope Lily gets whats coming to her! Will James get another chance?...
HexyMama chapter 13 . 4/14/2013
OH NO! Poor Harry!
HexyMama chapter 9 . 4/14/2013
I love this Ron! I usually hate him
Cannawope chapter 24 . 4/7/2013
First of all, I love this story. It is honestly very good. Unfortunately, you keep vanishing! Pleasepleaseplese update again and more often
Ev3rL05t chapter 13 . 4/6/2013
THE BITCH! I'm sorry but god you're making me hate her more then I should. I wasn't really sure about the James-making-up-for-ignoring-Harry but when he was talking to Lily I thought that was great but then she just has to obliviate him! I feel like cursing her :(
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