|Reviews for Total Eclipse of the Heart|
| hawkeye1958 chapter 8 . 7/3/2010
Jacob and Edward, always fighting insiide or outside of Twilight!
| hawkeye1958 chapter 7 . 7/3/2010
HOT BABY HOT!
| hawkeye1958 chapter 4 . 7/2/2010
| hawkeye1958 chapter 3 . 7/2/2010
Keep on writing
| hawkeye1958 chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
Great chapter, keep on writing
| hawkeye1958 chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Great storyline, keep on writing
| maggiejoma chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
LIKE THIS VERY MUCH...:)
| sarahuk101 chapter 21 . 6/14/2010
| MagdulkaCullen chapter 22 . 6/8/2010
I can't believe it's over... I really enjoyed reading this story. You did a great job ;)
| Hope Edwards chapter 22 . 6/2/2010
that was amazeing i loved it
| Honey Ze chapter 22 . 5/31/2010
| abbie.loves.twilight chapter 22 . 5/30/2010
| abbie.loves.twilight chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Wow. I love it so far. I can see the difference in writing style between the povs but it is great because it shows it through a real guy's eyes. If that makes sense...
When Bella gets the letter I think she should have thought about it more than she did instead of agreeing immediately. But I guess that applies more if she will have a stubborn side because then I think she would have thought of it more.
Great on the whold. Perfect starting block
| Team Switzerland 703 chapter 22 . 5/26/2010
AWWWWWWWWW... great story. i loved it. im sad its finished, but now im gonna read arogance. but not tonight, cos youve already kept me up too late and im not gonna be able to get up early in the morning for school
:( lol. haha best acceptence speach ever :):):)
please please please keep writing lots of storys, and update ymmdct soon. lol. xxxxxx
| Team Switzerland 703 chapter 21 . 5/26/2010
OMG THAT WAS TOO MUCH DRAMA! lol. i love this story! ts so good!
I knew it would be Mike! haha I was right ;)
but i thought it would be carmen, not lauren :( ah well
haha my names lauren and its kinda annoying cos in all the stories laurens an evil bitch ;)