|Reviews for Total Eclipse of the Heart|
| Wants2BeACullen chapter 22 . 10/10/2010
| DaniWithGreenEyes chapter 22 . 9/25/2010
sorry i showed up to the party so late but i had to let both of you know that i absolutely loved TEOTH! i laughed, i cried, i bought the tshirt!
you guys make a great team. now what can we do to get you guys out of hiatus mode and into writing again, im making my way to arrogance next.
hope all is well
| fighter419 chapter 22 . 9/15/2010
i must say..I LOVED THIS STORY! and just a lil side note. i was readin the hostage scene and all that when i was in class and i had to dig my nails into my hand or arm to keep from crying so yeah. amazing story!
| julz12 chapter 17 . 9/10/2010
AMAZING! loved it!
| GetOffMyChick chapter 22 . 9/7/2010
SO cute. I'm glad i found this story, even if i was a tad late :p I think that was the perfect ending, i'm sad to see it go xx
| GetOffMyChick chapter 16 . 9/6/2010
I always dread the leaving :/ I'm so very glad it didn't last for like 10 chapters, that always pains me to no end! Yay for moving on (and in) together xx
| RiRi17 chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
Edward's point of view sounds so formal, whereas Bella's is more relaxed. Loving this.
| MamaJoyof3 chapter 22 . 8/31/2010
AWESOME story you guys! You both did an awesome job and I loved that you each wrote the points of views! I can't wait to read more of your stories!
| sammie09 chapter 22 . 8/23/2010
I just love ur story!
It's the second time that I read it and I still love it as much as the first time ! XD
I also love the endingnit was so funny what Bella did and I also love the fact that Henry was born on April 22! The same day as my birthday! Lol
| Violet Bliss chapter 7 . 8/18/2010
I love this story, it's just great :)
| ILoveEdward76 chapter 6 . 8/13/2010
Bella seems a little confused to me. First she wants Edward, is attracted to Edward and thinks she may love him and then all of a sudden when Jake is around she can only focus on him, his smell, the way he looks and feels and his kiss. Can she just pick one and leave the other for somebody else (preferably me) although I want Edward, she can have Jake.
| asiula chapter 22 . 8/11/2010
Just finished reading the story :)
It was quite good! :)
Thank you for the entertainment! :)
| katshadow89 chapter 20 . 8/7/2010
o.m.g.! I died reading the 'sex scene'. lol!
| lynsrob chapter 22 . 8/6/2010
Great story, some romance, lots of lemons, a mystery with suspense and some laughs. Thanks for the good time.
| lynsrob chapter 8 . 8/3/2010
I think Carlisle had a right to worry about his son losing his temper, but sending him to the house like a little kid was kind of embarassing, I would have gotten pissed. Loved the 1/2 lemon though, it was hot just like Edward.