| Reviews for Total Eclipse of the Heart |
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   papillon417 chapter 1 . 7/21/2008 OMFG! so i wasnt expecting this at all. a new story from ashel-13 & hayden yay! i have to tell u guys... u really did an excellent job with this! i love the way hayden writes edward & the story is perfect. it's awesome! i seriously can not wait for an update! so pleasee please! update asap! |
| IrishEyes2010 chapter 1 . 7/21/2008 Awesome first chapter. I really do like the way Hayden writes Edward. Can I steal him from you? Haha. Anyways, I can't wait for more from you guys! Keep it up :-) |
| ali93 chapter 1 . 7/21/2008 ah that was AMAZING! cant wait for more! really good! your husband is a very good writer, and so are you! ok, well... POST MORE REALLY SOON HUN! love it! love ya! xoxoxoxoxox, Ali! |
| ExtraOrdinary.dreamer chapter 1 . 7/21/2008 I absolutely adore this idea, it's ingenious. :-) I can just imagine how spoiled Libby is seeing that her dad is THE Edward Cullen. I wonder . . . who's richer? Bella or Edward, seeing that Edward in the series spoiled Bella rotten. Ashel-13 and you hubby; HaydenCullen are awesome writers, you've got Bella and Edward's POVs down to the T. P.S. You must absolutely do On With It, and make Hayden have a catchphrase too or somethin'. P.P.S. It must absolutely suck for you guys to have such a huge cult following on all your stories, and knowing that people are depending on you for their fanfiction fix (don't mind my hyper sarcasm, I'm on a soda rush *sweatdrop*.) |
| IWant2bDifferent chapter 1 . 7/21/2008 i 100% completely sgree with MyBlackRoses when she says U R NOT ALLOWED TO STOP! this is an awesome story! lol i love Edwards POV Continue writing... Beckerz |
| Bezzaletta chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 Why do you write ashel-13 and hubby? give us a name instead of 'hubby' so i can praise both of you for your great writing skills! great work BTW! can't wait for more! bezzie:) |
| Batman4eva chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 thats was awesome can't wait to read the rest update soon u 2! |
| MyBlackRoses chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 You both are not allowed to stop writing this. It isn't allowed. At all. Don't even think about it. Now that I've gotten that out of my system... It's amazing! I gotted sad when Liam was in the hospital though... Poor Edward. Bad things seem to happen to him a lot. And then comes Bella an ta-da! All betters. Sorry for the small rant. You're lucky I stopped it there(here?). I've had way too much sugar and that's always bad for the peoples I talk to(or type to). Anyway, it's amazing. I love it(and you too but not in a creepy pervy 'I wanna jump you' kinda way), MyBlackRoses |
| OwlyCakes chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 The Owl wants more. Now, please? D Libby is adorable and I'm almost dying to know who Edward had a baby with. |
| cullenlover1901 chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 pleas yp date this one regularly since you dont with the other stories this tottally rocked my sox |
| bloodiLove chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 I loved it! I think edward already having a child is going to make it very interesting |
| Kanaan-Lynne chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 ! Can't wait to read more! |
| Bellashouldvebeen chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 wow. ashel i love the way your hubby writes. and the contrast between your guys writing is awesome. i cant wait to get some lemons in a guys perspective. neato i hope you guys update soon its awesome so far. :) :) |
| Screams-At-Midnight chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 Sounds good, update soon xx |
| Cajungirl chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 I think I am going to love it. Like you, Bella's side will reamin true, light and airy. I immediately thought that Hayden writes a lot like James Patterson (I hope you like him.I do.) which will make Edward caring, passionate but focused on the job.I can't wait for more. Let the feeding frenzy begin. |