| Reviews for Total Eclipse of the Heart |
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   laibballfan chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 excellent start, cannot wait for more. you two work well together (guess it's a good thing considering you're married). update soon. |
| Night script chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 cool story... nice... It is different but I still like it... can't wait to read more... |
| Hidingsorealpeoplecantfindouta chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 Wow...Edward is HOTT! omg...I totally love the tatoos too! tell your hubby that he's amazing...what's his id I totally want to read his other stories.. |
| mjdanny chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 I loved it! Well, Devin could use an attitude check, but other than that, i think you're all set! UPDATE SOON! |
| Michelle62092 chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 i totally want some DTE later ;) I like it :) please update soon!:D |
| Music ADD chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 Libby sounds like the most adorable little girl in existence. I LOVE Edward's tatoos, they're so sexy, I can't wait until I get mine. |
| call-it-golden chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 This has got to be the coolest idea ever. I mean, I'm almost positive this has never happened before: that a guy and girl that met over the internet would instantly click and "get married" and end of co-writing a story. I can already tell that I am going to love it! I also hope for that lemony goodness and am excited to read some from a males perspective. Good luck with this story! I will be reading each chapter the second I get the e-mail notifying me of an update! PS: I see that you live in Wisconson. I just watched an episode of "That 70s Show" and instantly thought of you...is that weird? But I was wondering, do you like go around singing the theme song and shout the "Hello Wisconson!" part randomly? I would. Haha ) |
| twike chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 Great story. Keep it up! |
| Eddielover101 chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 wow girly thats good! i so want to see whats going to happen next please update when you get a chance because this chp was very good i love how edward has a little girl oh i cant wait for more thanks Pickles! |
| Nostalgicmiss chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 This is gonna be awesome . . . looking forward to reading more. The two styles work really well together, loving it! |
| cocoajunkie chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 Love the story so far! :p |
| rara.vampirelover chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 ohh this looks like it is going to be awesome! DTE request! haha |
| Amanda.In.Tx chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 I am now and forever an ashel groupie. This story is amazing and I can't wait to see where all it goes. And having a guy write in EPOV is kick ass. Can't wait! And Edward alone is HOT, but a SWAT Edward...hmm...just thinking about the uniform...and the guns...and the muscles...yeah, ok. Love it girl...and hubby Hayden! ) |
| RedDawn07 chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 I really enjoyed that and I like the premise. I can't wait to read more! You guys make a great team. :D |
| Tai Birdsong chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 Whoo! I'm so excited to see an ashel-13xHayden collab, as I'm sure every other female (meaning every other person-besides Hayden, who doesn't count) is too. I loved how Edward acts towards his daughter. He's so sweet. |