This is sounding like it will be just as big as MLOONAA. I really, really loved that story. I really like the sequel so far too. This one is quite different though, in a good way. I think one of my favorite 'little things' about the story is the fact that everyone knows Bella instead of Edward this time. I like that they both have and had their own seperate lives before they met. So, just out of curiosity, are you going to reveal who Libby's mom is. I would love to know who Edward was, at one point in time, married to. Or was she a love child with a bitch that couldn't see how great having a family with Edward would be so she walked out on said family. Coincidentally destroying Edward in the process. I personally think that this chapter flowed quite seamlessly. You both did a lovely job with writing your own sides and bringing it together in one chapter. I would never have known that it was written by two different people if I hadn't read it in the beginning AN. Keep on keeping on. Much Love

I am in love you guys! Dude, this is so cool and completely different! I really cannot wait for the rest! :)

I think i'm in love! this is so good! you both did a great job! i love the way edward is written! and of course, bella too! edward with a daughter and a tattoo? hottness! can't wait for more!

I take it, you liked the name from my story? Elizabeth Grace? I like this story a lot, It seems very different from everything else you've written. I love both of you as writers and this story is great!

this story sounds AWESOME. Your hubby writes well! Can't wait for more

This is a fabulous beginning, and I definitely look forward to more. Well done!

Hayden writes Edward so awesome, but so did Ashel. I love this story already. Edward makes such a seet daddy and I can't wait for his interaction with Bella. Will we get to know what happened to Liam and Edward and why he pannicked?

Absolutely loved it!

hm...that shall be good lol i cant wait so update soon kay!

I realy like this story! Oh and I love that it's a joint story it makes it really interesting. Can't wait for more chapters!

I like it! :D Ishtar14, told me I had to read her cub's work. It's good to both of you and I'm looking forward to more.

You guys write really well together. It's great to have a guy writing the guys persepctive for once. Love it so far can't wait for more)

Ashel..you've done it again..you completely sucked me into this story..and I'm completely looking forward to you writing along side your hubby Hayden..because judging from this first chapter..he's an amazing writer. Thank you soo much for giving me ANOTHER fanfiction to be obsessed about!

Loving the story! Very original and I'm a sucker for stories with children.

I'm looking forward to see where this is going. :D

loved it!

I really liked both of the pov's!

Can't wait for more!

Wait a minute! i did not know you were married. In MLOONA you said you were a virgin haha. So your married and still haven't done the deed. and your profile says your 19. so you must of married young? haha. sorry but I do love the story. Excited for more.