| Reviews for Total Eclipse of the Heart |
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   petmom1213 chapter 22 . 12/4/2016 Very good. Thank you both! |
| petmom1213 chapter 20 . 12/4/2016 Jacob is yuck. I do not like him. He is a master manipulator. |
| petmom1213 chapter 14 . 12/4/2016 Edward is so stupid. Carmen threatened Libby once so why would he turn his back on her? Idiot. |
| petmom1213 chapter 13 . 12/4/2016 First of all they are both idiots. He should NEVER have said that about Libby being his daughter. Why would she go to Jacob over her best friend? She just met Jacob. That makes NO sense. And having Carmen come , well I knew she would show up but Edward should of been cold to her and taken Libby away from the toxic bitch. As you can tell this chapter made me angry. It sounds like Bella is still living at Jacob's house. I hope not. UGH! |
| petmom1213 chapter 8 . 12/4/2016 Carlisle was too angry to be the father of a 27 year old man. And to threaten his job was just too over the top. As a parent you can get angry and tell them your opinion but never tell them what to do or mess with their job. |
| petmom1213 chapter 6 . 12/3/2016 Yuck. I can't stand Jacob! |
| neelix lee chapter 22 . 11/20/2016 Thank you both for a wonderful story. |
| mubeenakhan.3 chapter 22 . 8/31/2016 Totally in love with all of your stories. I loved the ending here. A perfect happy one but K really want you to continue with Arrogance. Please? I need my daily dosage of ashel-13's stories...xoxoxo |
| vampdreams chapter 22 . 6/18/2016 I have to say A job extremely well done And a perfect last chapter to tie it all up and show us where they are in their lives I loved reading the characters and how they and their relationships transformed over time as they traversed through the various hurdles of life Kudos guys...! |
| Angelmagnet chapter 13 . 12/28/2015 Honestly, you should have labeled this "angst", because it is. First of all, when Bella was upset about Elizabeth why did she call Jacob. How did they become best friends so fast. And, when she left Edward she went to Jacob, so I'm guessing Edwards not taking that so well. Unnecessary drama. |
| Angelmagnet chapter 1 . 12/27/2015 Most excellent start. I'm lovin this story. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2015 Sooooo many things wrong with that chapter. |
| Atwiggs chapter 11 . 11/16/2015 Awww! Libby is just so sweet. I remember when my first boyfriend moved across the USA from east coast to west. We both cried. We were 6 yrs old! It didn't take too long to get over it! I hope Jacob is going to behave himself! |
| Atwiggs chapter 10 . 11/16/2015 Damn that was Hot! You guys are killing me! |
| Atwiggs chapter 9 . 11/16/2015 Can't wait! |