I guess Edward won't care about Libby's make-up because he's worried about how Bella is going to take his and Jake's fight. Man I hate Jake always getting in the way. I prefer stories without him most of the time. He's fake and he just wants to screw her. Maybe not, but I bet Edward doesn't expose Jake for what he is. If he does, she may think he's just too jealous and stand up for Jake. God I hope not!

I hope you guys are still together! But I know things happen. But you guys are very compatible and sweet. I hope you made it. I mean it is seven years since you wrote this wonderful story. I didn't know about Twilight until 2011 (sucks, I know). I missed a lot but I got hooked like everybody else. I love Twilight fanfic. I am bedridden now due to health reasons, so reading is very important to me. Thanks so much for writing!

Poor Edward visiting the men's room for a quick yank! I guess he and Bella need to work that out. They both need it! Now that sneak preview did not make me happy. Who took Libby!? Damn!

I wonder if they will make it through the night w/o doing the deed! I'm sure if I was in the bed with him, I'd make him very happy! ;)

Poor Edward, he went through hell with that bitch Carmen...Looks like Bella would fit in with them just fine! I just hope Carmen never changes her mind!

Wow you guys were really young when you wrote this! So far a great job. You must be around 26 or 27 now and that is still young!

I am loving this so far! I love that you two are working together. You both are amazing writers. Thx for writing this. Sorry that I just found this Fic.

So far this is good!

This story had lots of potential, but it's been so rushed it's made it diffcult to read. There was also a lot of story lines that make very little sense, like no one would let their child call someone mommy until they were 100% sure they were in it for the long haul. And why would Carlisle offer Libby's birth mother the job of being her nanny? He wasn't even looking for a nanny. Also what kind of body guard makes the person he's protecting follow him around and not the over way round? Sorry, but I'm not going to finish reading this.

The whole argument story line is ridiculous. Edward spoke to her horribly and she left. Why is she the one in the wrong? I don't like Bella's character, she's weak and let's Edward walk, all over her.

Love It!

Why is it such a big deal that they fought?

There's so many original characters, it's as if it's not even fanfiction anymore. :/

I wish I could see Jacob for real and I'm only a little girl and Jacob he is my biggest fane ever and Bella she is so cool I only like Jacob and Bella I wish I cold meet them some times I see Jacob in my dreams and I don't know why I see him in my dreams but he and Bella are so so so cool so I hope one day I see them and it fills like I want to cry a lot just to see them I just wish that I do see them because all of my dreams are to see them and then thoughts dreams would have came true to me. And I'm 10 years old and I would love to see them I hope. :) :) :)

Excellent story! Absolutely loved it :-) Can't wait to read more work from both of you! Great job!