Reviews for Total Eclipse of the Heart |
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Atwiggs chapter 8 . 11/16/2015 I guess Edward won't care about Libby's make-up because he's worried about how Bella is going to take his and Jake's fight. Man I hate Jake always getting in the way. I prefer stories without him most of the time. He's fake and he just wants to screw her. Maybe not, but I bet Edward doesn't expose Jake for what he is. If he does, she may think he's just too jealous and stand up for Jake. God I hope not! |
Atwiggs chapter 7 . 11/16/2015 I hope you guys are still together! But I know things happen. But you guys are very compatible and sweet. I hope you made it. I mean it is seven years since you wrote this wonderful story. I didn't know about Twilight until 2011 (sucks, I know). I missed a lot but I got hooked like everybody else. I love Twilight fanfic. I am bedridden now due to health reasons, so reading is very important to me. Thanks so much for writing! |
Atwiggs chapter 6 . 11/15/2015 Poor Edward visiting the men's room for a quick yank! I guess he and Bella need to work that out. They both need it! Now that sneak preview did not make me happy. Who took Libby!? Damn! |
Atwiggs chapter 5 . 11/15/2015 I wonder if they will make it through the night w/o doing the deed! I'm sure if I was in the bed with him, I'd make him very happy! ;) |
Atwiggs chapter 4 . 11/15/2015 Poor Edward, he went through hell with that bitch Carmen...Looks like Bella would fit in with them just fine! I just hope Carmen never changes her mind! |
Atwiggs chapter 3 . 11/15/2015 Wow you guys were really young when you wrote this! So far a great job. You must be around 26 or 27 now and that is still young! |
Atwiggs chapter 2 . 11/15/2015 I am loving this so far! I love that you two are working together. You both are amazing writers. Thx for writing this. Sorry that I just found this Fic. |
Atwiggs chapter 1 . 11/15/2015 So far this is good! |
Lyndsey chapter 17 . 10/29/2015 This story had lots of potential, but it's been so rushed it's made it diffcult to read. There was also a lot of story lines that make very little sense, like no one would let their child call someone mommy until they were 100% sure they were in it for the long haul. And why would Carlisle offer Libby's birth mother the job of being her nanny? He wasn't even looking for a nanny. Also what kind of body guard makes the person he's protecting follow him around and not the over way round? Sorry, but I'm not going to finish reading this. |
Lyndsey chapter 16 . 10/29/2015 The whole argument story line is ridiculous. Edward spoke to her horribly and she left. Why is she the one in the wrong? I don't like Bella's character, she's weak and let's Edward walk, all over her. |
EnglishBookLover chapter 22 . 9/25/2015 Love It! |
voidxtiles chapter 8 . 9/9/2015 Why is it such a big deal that they fought? |
voidxtiles chapter 1 . 9/7/2015 There's so many original characters, it's as if it's not even fanfiction anymore. :/ |
Rhianna chapter 16 . 8/10/2015 I wish I could see Jacob for real and I'm only a little girl and Jacob he is my biggest fane ever and Bella she is so cool I only like Jacob and Bella I wish I cold meet them some times I see Jacob in my dreams and I don't know why I see him in my dreams but he and Bella are so so so cool so I hope one day I see them and it fills like I want to cry a lot just to see them I just wish that I do see them because all of my dreams are to see them and then thoughts dreams would have came true to me. And I'm 10 years old and I would love to see them I hope. :) :) :) |
MiccaF chapter 22 . 1/7/2015 Excellent story! Absolutely loved it :-) Can't wait to read more work from both of you! Great job! |