Reviews for Total Eclipse of the Heart
blb1000 chapter 16 . 9/1/2014
Ah, what happened to, "I want to marry you and raise or children together"? Charlie will have the same question, I'm guessing.
blb1000 chapter 15 . 9/1/2014
See, still a dumb ass.
blb1000 chapter 14 . 9/1/2014
WHY DOES EDWARD KEEP LETTING CARMEN IN HIS HOUSE? Let her undo his pants & nearly suck him off? Let her continue to get close to his daughter when he KNOWS she had I'll intent? WHAT THE DUCK!? I've lost all respect for his dumb ass.
blb1000 chapter 13 . 9/1/2014
Well crap re Carmin. I won't think much of your Edward if he just picks back up with her. Carl & Esme would probably disown him too.
blb1000 chapter 12 . 9/1/2014
With that in mind, I'm guessing she'll start to distance herself now. They really need an investigator on this case, not just a bodyguard. After Em being hurt, maybe they'll get one.
blb1000 chapter 11 . 9/1/2014
With the exception of that one moment at her apartment, he certainly hasn't been doing much protecting or investigating. And he's getting paid for this?
blb1000 chapter 10 . 9/1/2014
They certainly squeezed a lot into one evening!
blb1000 chapter 9 . 9/1/2014
Dirty talking Ed was very well written. No whores or sluts uttered, which always rub me the wrong way.
blb1000 chapter 8 . 9/1/2014
In Edwards defense, Jake was looking for a fight. You never disrespect another guys mamma.
blb1000 chapter 6 . 8/31/2014
Sound like she's attracted to both of them. Ed's going to have to stear clear of getting involved.
blb1000 chapter 5 . 8/31/2014
Hard to picture a guys room screaming seduction.
blb1000 chapter 4 . 8/31/2014
I never would have guessed Carmen.
blb1000 chapter 3 . 8/31/2014
We don't know what Libby looks like, other than her green eyes, so no hints there as to her other parent.
blb1000 chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
Heavy stuff from his side to start us off.
divyvicki chapter 8 . 8/29/2014
I think Bella is going to be very upset with Edward over his fight with Jacob. Too bad cuz I agree with Edward! He is a tool.
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