Reviews for Total Eclipse of the Heart
divyvicki chapter 8 . 8/29/2014
I think Bella is going to be very upset with Edward over his fight with Jacob. Too bad cuz I agree with Edward! He is a tool.
KimiD chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
I totally love when it's a guy writing Edward husband and wife, Oh Yeah So far, great start and plot... should be an interesting ride. And that it is a Complete story makes it even better... no pauses in the action!
divyvicki chapter 7 . 8/22/2014
Such a great turn of events.
divyvicki chapter 6 . 8/15/2014
Sure didn't like reading about a kiss between Jacob and Bella. Poor Edward!
divyvicki chapter 5 . 7/24/2014
I liked jeolous Edward and how he put the actor in his place.
divyvicki chapter 4 . 7/16/2014
I really line thus story, but don't u think they're moving along a bit fast?
divyvicki chapter 3 . 7/11/2014
Cute party.
divyvicki chapter 2 . 7/7/2014
I liked getting the differing POVs.
divyvicki chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
This was recommended to me by Angelina Marie and I loved the first chapter.
twicrazreader chapter 2 . 3/30/2014
I liked both POV!
Libby is gonna be the love of everyone I am sure!
momma2fan chapter 22 . 1/13/2014
LMAO! Alice the cockblocker to the end! Loved it! Great job!
twirob chapter 22 . 12/9/2013
excellent story! but you didnt mention liam and heather at the end? im off to read your other stories now! ;)
Guest chapter 8 . 11/8/2013
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Guest chapter 4 . 9/21/2013
Wow Carmen is a real winner...Libby is better off without her
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