|Reviews for Total Eclipse of the Heart|
| fireagate chapter 9 . 1/16/2013
haha. You both are hilarious. I can just imagine the both of you enjoying this chapter. The dirty talking was good but maybe you could have gone for less obvious phrases.. make it more personal and intimate. I don't know what I am saying. Never mind me.
| fireagate chapter 3 . 1/15/2013
Aw so sweet..and love the author notes
| aqua-love-angel-13 chapter 22 . 1/12/2013
Wow! Amazing story! I loved it!
| D-maximum twilight chapter 22 . 1/3/2013
I just loved this story! Bravo!
| amy chapter 16 . 12/19/2012
i loved this, but i did think it was slightly predictable. im sorry :))
| amy chapter 2 . 12/18/2012
this is amazing
| sammieanne chapter 10 . 10/15/2012
I love each and every lemon, let us not forget ; this is a very good story, the flow from each chapter to the next chapter is easy and interesting,I love this story. The child (Libby bug) she's wonderful, I've gotten some great laughs from the way she explain you, keep writing.
| twicrazreader chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Hi Ash and Hubby:
I found your fic on TwiFanfictionRecs. I love that you two are writing each POVs.
Thanks for that.
| I Love Dimitri Belikov chapter 17 . 10/4/2012
| edward-n-bella-fr-eternity1207 chapter 22 . 9/22/2012
Absolutely amazing job! Beautiful story! Xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
| Naomi M chapter 22 . 9/20/2012
Loved it one of my favourites stories :D
| dirtypillowtalk chapter 12 . 8/31/2012
I Love this fic!
| beachblonde2244 chapter 21 . 8/20/2012
Love this story :)
| beachblonde2244 chapter 22 . 8/20/2012
| beachblonde2244 chapter 17 . 8/18/2012
They're so cute, I'm loving re-reading this :)