|Reviews for Total Eclipse of the Heart|
| HerGreenEyesSee chapter 3 . 4/12/2013
So from the use of the endearment 'little bit', I'm thinking you guys are buffy fans too? :)
| emmett23meg chapter 22 . 4/7/2013
| Cookie2202 chapter 4 . 4/2/2013
I loove your story
Omg that's just wrooong! I would have never ever left Edward or Libby! :(
| TwiFanfictionRecs.com chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Total Eclipse of the Heart has been added to the Featured Fics Library on www . twifanfictionrecs . com ;-)
| Dfhyfjjhhk chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Love love love!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
| fireagate chapter 9 . 1/16/2013
haha. You both are hilarious. I can just imagine the both of you enjoying this chapter. The dirty talking was good but maybe you could have gone for less obvious phrases.. make it more personal and intimate. I don't know what I am saying. Never mind me.
| fireagate chapter 3 . 1/15/2013
Aw so sweet..and love the author notes
| aqua-love-angel-13 chapter 22 . 1/12/2013
Wow! Amazing story! I loved it!
| D-maximum twilight chapter 22 . 1/3/2013
I just loved this story! Bravo!
| amy chapter 16 . 12/19/2012
i loved this, but i did think it was slightly predictable. im sorry :))
| amy chapter 2 . 12/18/2012
this is amazing
| sammieanne chapter 10 . 10/15/2012
I love each and every lemon, let us not forget ; this is a very good story, the flow from each chapter to the next chapter is easy and interesting,I love this story. The child (Libby bug) she's wonderful, I've gotten some great laughs from the way she explain you, keep writing.
| twicrazreader chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Hi Ash and Hubby:
I found your fic on TwiFanfictionRecs. I love that you two are writing each POVs.
Thanks for that.
| I Love Dimitri Belikov chapter 17 . 10/4/2012