Reviews for Turning Circles
Lizster88 chapter 9 . 6/18/2010
Good interpretations, that's mostly what I think the characters must have been thinking in those situations.

Loved how you portrayed jack, hale, doug and kate(particularly the last ones). Yeah, never thought of hale's reaction to the kiss before, awesome!
aerisbolt chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
So for the fact that I messed up by not taking note of this being a challenge, let me try one more time and say that you did a wonderful job capturing the heart of the characters in such few words. I always have been to wordy and need a lot of words to write my points and feeling for the characters I write about, so seeing you be able to so it with so little allowed words is fabulous. I really enjoyed it!
aerisbolt chapter 9 . 1/4/2009
Pretty good. I wish each chapter had been a little bit longer, but I like how you gave flashes of the story with your own thoughts and writing style woven in. My favorite part was Hate Hale, loved that. Keep writing!