|Reviews for Falling Apart|
| Destiny Kitty chapter 7 . 1/25/2010
Really enjoyed this story. It's nicely thought-out and doesn't end in an artificially simple happily-ever-after, which is cool, and you did a good job with a lot of content without making it really long (something I struggle with XD). Wish I had time for a long review, but lemme try to remember what I like best... Your characterizations are great. I really enjoyed Bryan throughout the story, and the way the characters understand and relate to each other, or change their actions due to the anticipated reactions of their friends (Kai lol). It is an intelligent story, which I really like. Awesome job! ~Des
| Spotlight Effect chapter 7 . 1/3/2009
This was great! Sure, I haven't seen Beyblade all that much and didn't know much background, but there were enough good character interactions that let me figure it all out.
Was a little violent at the end [ew eyes falling out and finger-eating xD] but I still liked how it seemed real and relevant to the story. I did like the end though; it works as just an ending or as a link to a sequel.
Preggers? Didn't see that coming. xD
| miella allstar chapter 7 . 12/26/2008
cute stroy, adorable couples... i actually cried when the fight between lee and kevin happened but then tala saves the day so cuter :) good story keep writting
peace out for now from miella allstar :)
| kaitouahiru chapter 5 . 9/7/2008
I liked the confrontation too- stupid Lee...I love the pairing by the way!
| Agent Tuesday chapter 4 . 8/10/2008
Fantabulous, can't wait to read more!
Tala/Kevin has to be singularly the oddest pairing I've read yet...but I like it, nice job. :D