Reviews for Constructive Criticism
BrittBailey chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Aww :) That was cute. it literally made me go aw after I read Gray's review. lol Good work. :)
Calypso Tea chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
This was an awesome story! It's so incredibly cute and sweet. I loved every bit of it. _
heartkeeper27 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
Aw...that's really cute and sweet. I think it was very sweet for Gray to organize the whole thing. Continue your great work. -
The Scarlet Sky chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
Oh my God. Kuruk. I mean...gah, c'mere for a digi-hug. *hugs*

Everything was just too cute. Gray's Picoult reference made me squeal, and so did Mary's new obsession with FictionPress and all of Mineral Town's discovery of the internet. And it was Gray x Mary, too! rock. Reply your b-day date to me ASAP, you hear? I'm going to have to start early to outdo something like this. xD
HarvestMoonGlows chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
Sweet, simple and really tells how it feels on here. I feel Mary's pain, sometimes I get so nervous about what people will think, I forget little details. XD Then nothing makes sense!

By and by, what does this mean, I think I'm just a dummy?

!- page size: 8.5in 11in; margin: 0.79in P margin-bottom: 0.08in -


Anyway, wonderful! Really, there's not much else to say, it's KAWAII! _ -goes to tell Scarlet happy B-day also- See you soon!
Mage the Observer chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
Nice. Definitely gives a feel for the nature of an internet writer.