Reviews for The Mistresses of The First Emperor
Dragoon Cecilia chapter 4 . 8/11/2013
That's one of the cool things about the manga - That Ryu DOES actually talk. and that adds a lot to the story.
this is pretty good so far
Dragoon Cecilia chapter 3 . 8/11/2013
The manga of Breath of Fire IV (Utsurowazaru mono) says that A-tur is Female, not male
zephyrus 123 chapter 5 . 10/3/2009
Sweet endings. From all chapters, I very liked this one.

Will you make the sequel between Mami and Fou-Lu? Please? Please? -bend knees-
zephyrus 123 chapter 4 . 10/3/2009
Not matter what they conversation. Just follow your imagines/memories.

I hope the end is so interesting.
zephyrus 123 chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
It was similar to the game story. Like it!

Oh, why Mami weren't to do anything? So, for what did she follow him? Perhaps that question could answer if I read the next chapter. _

-sorry for my bad sentences/grammar, cause I'm still bad in English study-
zephyrus 123 chapter 2 . 10/3/2009
Good story
zephyrus 123 chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
I got nostalgic when I reading this fict. It was so tragic story in Breath of Fire VI -my mind-.

-sigh- I want to play this game again.
Ghaist13 chapter 5 . 7/29/2009

Pretty good. The ending seemed a little rushed but then again, given the circumstances present in the story i.e. Nilam's death, Fou's slight psychotic behaviour and Ryu's team's giving Fou moral support, you've gotten away with it pretty well. It's been an awesome read. Thanks for sharing!

Ghaist13 chapter 2 . 8/1/2008
Hey there, nice work. The addition of Nilam into the story is well done, it fits almost perfectly into the time line. And the flash of background on Nilam's past/ancestory is quite good. I'm impressed Keep at it. Looking forward to the next installment.