|Reviews for Becoming|
| WrenchWielder chapter 14 . 11/26/2012
Wow, holy cow that was amaizing! I loved it, loved the way you set it up and the ending was perfect!
| Von chapter 14 . 7/11/2011
This story was very awesome and a little sad. :D
I loved how you showed Soundwave's group to be so close, without losing any of their twisted origin.
I can't help but hope that Stockade's initial questioning coupled with Sam's automatic loyalty to loved ones over propaganda will take root and spread. Both sides of the war are stuck in a rut. Cybertron is dead and so is the All Spark - time to change the game.
I liked how Sam was more sparkling than any other NewBot, due to his reprogramming. Ravage was, of course, the most adorably violent older sister in creation.
I loved the twist where Sam walked out - entirely willingly or not - because his abilities were growing beyond his ability to cope and nobody noticed.
Very awesome story in very many ways.
| femme4jack chapter 14 . 2/16/2011
This story had so many wonderful elements. First of all, I love that there aren't simply good guys and bad guys. That the reason for the fighting is to protect family. There is such a strong sense of that among Soundwave's symbiots. While I'm disturbed Soundwave would reprogram others without a choice, I also see some gray areas in him. Was the femme who became Ravage forgotten by the Autobots? Doomed to die? If so, perhaps he did the right thing. On the other hand, stealing someone's memories just seems cruel.
Yet the Autobots are not without fault, and Prowl clearly shows. My hope is that someone the sense of family that Sonar/Sam shares with members of both factions can overcome factions. It seems the only thing that offers any hope for a war that they keep fighting despite there no longer being any reason to fight.
I'd love to see this story continue (like so many of yours). Great work!
| Teddy-wabbitz chapter 14 . 9/20/2010
A really good but sad story.
| FlorDeMaga chapter 14 . 6/13/2010
Is there any chance of this story continuing? I'm very interested to know about why Sam/Sonar went to Soundwave the day he was supposedly kidnapped. Even more so, the whole story, characters and attention to detail is amazingly well done, that it has me waiting for more.
| I love cute things chapter 14 . 4/29/2010
Sonic is cute! )
| Raining Ink chapter 14 . 3/26/2010
This story was a pleasant surprise. I just read it all the way through, and I really appreciate the originality and complexity. I especially like how you've made it so that there is really no "bad" side. The 'cons aren't exactly evil are they? And the 'bots aren't perfect, because they can be rather blind. Overall, a real pleasure. Is there any chance of future sequels? You've definitely left it open for that.
| LeLa London chapter 14 . 2/8/2010
Thanks for a fantastic and complex story. I was always eager for more, until I finally finished in the end. :)
| Blume chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Hi! I made a sketch an then I coloured thinkign about your 'Sonar' character!
hope you don't mind! ...and also that it's up to your general Idea of Sonar!
greenapplefreak . deviantart art / A-hard-worked-sketch-149378387
| Uniasus chapter 14 . 9/1/2009
*wiggles with glee* Awesome story. I feel bad for the part of Sam who remembers everything, but I get the feeling things will be alright in the end, even if there is more terror to come in the future.
| Sibaas chapter 14 . 8/2/2009
I bawled like a baby in just about every chapter! :sniffle: It was so sad! I love how you write Soundwave, I really do. I also loved Barricade. ;.; Though I am curious as to if they were telling the truth. Did sam really come to them? If so, why?
| lakuniko chapter 14 . 7/15/2009
wow~ this fic really gribbing my heart.
I love Sam youngling in this and all Con like him...
it painful that Sam can't be back with Bee, but I like it that way too.
| RobinofYJ chapter 14 . 7/13/2009
Wow, great job with this story. Enjoyed it very much.
| Insomnia Isky chapter 13 . 6/26/2009
This was a very bittersweet story with it's themes of family ties running through. I hope in the future the war can come to a ceasefire for Sonar's sake and he'll become friends Bumblebee and Mikeala again.
| star's dreams chapter 14 . 6/23/2009
SD: It was quiet bitter sweet. I could't think a better ending for a story as this. Thank you for writing it.