Daaaammmmnn! These are good! Nice!

You had me fooled :)
I was sure he was in the hospital, and Grace was with him...my mistake...and i am indeed captivated by your word...bu alas i must go for now. Love it so far :)

Annnnnd i was right! its Harvey Dent when he became Two-Face. Again wonderfully written, the vocab is well choosen. And no matter the lenght of the piece it is enjoyable to read. Like a quick nibble of something desired, leaving me hungry for more...

PS: sowwy :( still not logged it...

Vague, but well writen. Then again Joker has always been a man of mystery...This short but well written chapter does Batman justice. (Not somthing i say half-heartedly. i am a major Batman fan!) I like the format, and your syntax...

PS: My username is DeathNoteLover235...

At band camp

This is amazing! I love the disjointed feel it was to it. Beautiful. Can't wait to read more.

I've read all the small chapters and I've got only one word to say: WOW! I myself often scribbled down little chapters like yours, unfortunately couldn't in the end sew them up into one big story and I hope you succeed in doing this to yours! I love your style, I don't know whether you imitated someone else's or is it your own, but it's really well written, very captivating. :)

This is really good! 3

I loved each and every chapter of this!

You portrayed their relationship so well.

I love how dark it is.

damn u are good! plz update soon

Oh, how I missed these. You really have a gift and it really makes my day when see you've written more. I could go on and on with the praise I have for this particular piece as it was beautifully done. I loved the exchange between the two of them; so in character. And that end quote? Perfect.

I'm going to be selfish right now and say, PLEASE write more! Its absolutely necessary :)

gea

I really like this so far. It's a very realistic abusive relationship. INteresting

this chapter right here is why I love this fic! great work, very descriptive and unexpected. keep updating!

Wonderful :)

I love these little short tid bits.

Can't wait for the next update 3

i love the way you noted how she was used to him; like there was no other way to live except with him. Good Chapter!