Reviews for Black and White
Xantalos chapter 3 . 5/12/2013
Not bad so far, though there seems to be not that much of explanation of what's actually happening; while most people who read this will have played the game, it might be a bit confusing for those who have not.
I'm assuming that Sara is the player character of the game?
Long live Warhammer40k chapter 4 . 7/31/2009
This is the only good black and white fanfic I have read.
WedgePalmer chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
I love the description and you have great talent as a writer. One thing though; when changing scene try to seperate the paragraphs a little more. The upload won't allow more than one line between each sentance, so try putting a line of '-' or something. There's not really much more criticism I can place here except to watch your grammar. Good luck and I hope to read more of this :)