Reviews for The Weakness In Me
Ms. Kinnikufan chapter 2 . 7/29/2008
The way you went into Rinko's shock at Mantaro's loss was very, very, well done.

I like forward to future chapters.
Ms. Kinnikufan chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
This looks to be a really interesting, original fic. Please continue.
just staying blue chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Color me surprised.

I, for one, had completely given up on this section getting a decent fanfic at all. Here I see that you've written something that mostly 99% of the stories lack horribly: effort. The effort you put into the story shines brightly, and it's good that you touched base on plot elements that people hardly ever touch: Mari and Suguru's past relationship.

If you hardly get any reviews and you only find me reviewing the story, don't get disheartened. My only crtical advice is to take your time to spot grammar mistakes before posting a story. It will help a lot. Not that I found any glaring mistakes, it's just advice I try to pass along.
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