Reviews for Wilting
FanficCritic1805 chapter 8 . 12/20/2013
I honestly feel as though you tried entirely to hard to include smut and what you consider dry humor. I must admit that some parts could be considered comical ,but it was drowned out by the fact that huge chunks of the story were missing. I know that you wanted this to be a short story but to do that and make it good, you cannot include as much detail or if you do it should all be neatly included and not thrown in and choppy to give Bella's character "issues". It was included too dramatically and too quickly. Finally, you REALLY need to look into getting a beta, the amount of spelling and grammatical errors in the story is outrageous. Overall I'd give this story a 4.75/10.
dollegirl chapter 13 . 6/17/2013

Kanny1 chapter 13 . 6/7/2013
Have you given up on this story. It's so disappointing to read 13 chapters then nothing. I was enjoying this Bella.
maphie chapter 13 . 8/26/2012
Yuk - since there hasn't been an update in 3 yrs I guess Bella must have bit it on the shower floor. Too bad. It was a great read up until then.
majose chapter 13 . 5/29/2012
Wow! Edward should lose his license for screwing up with someone that is so emotionally unstable as Bella is. I wonder how he can live with himself.

I know I am probably wasting my time given how long has gone by, but I would love if you could continue the story. Bella deserves some real professional helps and Charlie deserves to be castrated. Along with Sussana. My only problem is that Maggie would end up an orphan, but sometimes you wonder what's the worse option
Finni1918 chapter 13 . 8/1/2011
Really? Unfinished? BOOOo! This is an awesome plot and I really wanted to see where you took these characters. So disappointing :*(
carollouise chapter 13 . 2/22/2011
it makes me really sad to see that this story hasnt been updated for so long! please bring it back! k, thanks :-)

MinnieShannon chapter 13 . 1/9/2011
This is realy good! Can you please please please update soon? I know it's need a while since you have, but this is so intresting and I would really love to read more xx
Zelda Maximus chapter 13 . 8/13/2010
Great story! Update soon?
Viksta chapter 13 . 7/7/2010
Wow those last coupla chapters were tough. Poor Bella.
TwiguysObsessed chapter 13 . 6/28/2010
This. This needs to be updated. ASAP pleaase :)))))
paolaanaiz chapter 13 . 5/6/2010
just caught up with the story... it's awesome... you have made me cry, laugh and just want to kick Bella's ass... seriously this is a breath of fresh air from the crap that I've been reading lately... waiting for the next review...
IvyRen chapter 13 . 5/5/2010
it almost made me cry :'( It was wonderful though, very descriptive.
DaDdYsLiTtLeSpOiLtBrAt chapter 13 . 4/22/2010
wow, i love it. you are an incredible writer, you make me feel everything Bella feels and you made me cry more than once. i can't wait for more.
suzy9799 chapter 4 . 4/22/2010
I really like your ff so far! It's different and interesting! Started cause of a rec from another story,and really glad i did! Can't wait to read more! Suzanne
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