Reviews for Wilting
IvyRen chapter 13 . 5/5/2010
it almost made me cry :'( It was wonderful though, very descriptive.
DaDdYsLiTtLeSpOiLtBrAt chapter 13 . 4/22/2010
wow, i love it. you are an incredible writer, you make me feel everything Bella feels and you made me cry more than once. i can't wait for more.
suzy9799 chapter 4 . 4/22/2010
I really like your ff so far! It's different and interesting! Started cause of a rec from another story,and really glad i did! Can't wait to read more! Suzanne
dearbetty chapter 13 . 4/7/2010
just read your story, its heart breaking and i love it! but i was pretty dissapointed to see you haven't updated in long time. do you still plan to continue the story?
mystify23 chapter 13 . 4/6/2010
motherfucker,you havent updated in almost a year? youve abandoned this story can you please just put some sort of notice up so we dont expect an update?i really hope you an awesome story!
SWIngalls chapter 13 . 4/5/2010
I am really enjoying this story. I hope it doesn't take too long for both of them to stop all the bullshit and just go with the flow! Love it.
Los Grotos chapter 13 . 4/2/2010
Shit. The only word that fits the feeling running across me is shit.

Shit...

Sexual assault...

I hope that you update soon.

I truly do.
Los Grotos chapter 12 . 4/2/2010
Oh no.

I'm watching a slow train wreck, and it's absolutely terrible.
Los Grotos chapter 11 . 4/2/2010
Fuck...

Fuck..!

Fuck!

Set Charlie and Susanne on fucking fire.

Shit their a pair of fucking sheep.

They can't think for themselves, and they don't even want to.

Fuck 'em all.
Los Grotos chapter 10 . 4/2/2010
Good job Edward and Charlie!

You managed to alienate one of the most important people in your lives.
Los Grotos chapter 9 . 4/2/2010
I would rather shut myself in a room with a clown than allow Bella into a house with her "father," and step people.
Los Grotos chapter 8 . 4/2/2010
I don't think Edward's mum would remind him to keep condoms everywhere.

That would most likely be his dad, or brother.
Los Grotos chapter 7 . 4/2/2010
Why?

Why does Bella believe herself unworthy?

I can't understand her reasoning.
Los Grotos chapter 6 . 4/2/2010
Wow.

They did the deed rather quickly.
Los Grotos chapter 3 . 4/1/2010
Bella just stated an undeniable truth:

What goes up must come down.

I your Bella.
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